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CaliforniaPeggy

(149,712 posts)
Sat Oct 20, 2018, 12:12 AM Oct 2018

I am going to post a poem about Khashoggi. I wrote it today.

Veneer

we say we’re
civilized
we know the fork to use,
where the salad sits
and the dessert
and the main dish

we say we’re polite the way we were raised
hello and goodbye it was nice to see you take care
of yourself please

we say we’re well educated at least high school, probably college
well maybe trade school or the armed services works too doesn’t it

We vote, we talk, we work, we .........live.

Skin is veneer.
It shields us, shows others who we pretend to be, hides our faults and sins
if you could strip it off what you would see –

just how civilized we pretend to be
when we
kill
injure
maim
or

torture


One finger at a time
then the arms
then the legs
then his
head


he was alive through all that, screaming his pain his horror his
grief at this betrayal

it did not end till they severed his
head

our skin is
just a veneer
for our evil deeds
thoughts
actions


they wore headphones for music.....




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I am going to post a poem about Khashoggi. I wrote it today. (Original Post) CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 OP
Oh, Peggy... Hekate Oct 2018 #1
I thank you, my dear Hekate... CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #2
wow dmoyer Oct 2018 #3
I appreciate your "wow" my dear dmoyer... CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #5
😥😥😥😭 SHRED Oct 2018 #4
I hear you, my dear SHRED. CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #6
Oh, Peggy. It is a horrible thing that was done and the President is excusing it. I despise all the The Wielding Truth Oct 2018 #7
I hope there will be justice done...but I really doubt it. CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #8
Well done, dear calpeggy. Right to the heart of the matter. MLAA Oct 2018 #9
Thank you so much, my dear MLAA! This is what I'd hoped to do. CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #10
Over my lifetime, dobleremolque Oct 2018 #11
Thank you for your kind words, my dear dobleremolque... CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #15
You well-articulated my feelings too. Duppers Oct 2018 #19
Well done. joshcryer Oct 2018 #12
Thank you, my dear joshcryer... CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #16
There is such uncompromising power in your words. The_jackalope Oct 2018 #13
Thank you, my dear jackalope! Very kind of you. CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #17
Wow! Brilliant. Moving. Duppers Oct 2018 #14
Thank you so much, my dear Duppers! CaliforniaPeggy Oct 2018 #18

The Wielding Truth

(11,415 posts)
7. Oh, Peggy. It is a horrible thing that was done and the President is excusing it. I despise all the
Sat Oct 20, 2018, 12:21 AM
Oct 2018

things that are done by him as our President. I'm sure the UN and human rights leaders here and around the world will act to bring the Saudi Prince and those involved in this heinous act to their just rewards.

dobleremolque

(492 posts)
11. Over my lifetime,
Sat Oct 20, 2018, 02:31 AM
Oct 2018

I can count less than a dozen instances when I finished reading something followed by a moment of stunned, silent, reflective, almost sacred and absorbed contemplation.

And I'm 70+ years old.

This was one of them.

Duppers

(28,127 posts)
19. You well-articulated my feelings too.
Sat Oct 20, 2018, 11:51 AM
Oct 2018

Folks should read this!

A second *Bravo!* for our wonderful and brilliant CalPeg.

Duppers

(28,127 posts)
14. Wow! Brilliant. Moving.
Sat Oct 20, 2018, 03:26 AM
Oct 2018

Am sending out a link to your poem, Peggy.

We see beneath the veneer and feel a deep sorrow and anguish about others

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