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3Hotdogs

(15,661 posts)
Wed Jun 10, 2026, 11:56 PM 7 hrs ago

The first sentence - - - authors know the first sentence of a novel has to catch the readers; imagination. So, if you

were writing your next novel, what would be your first sentence?

Mine? : What do I tell her?



I went through 6 trial sentences before I came up with the one above.

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The first sentence - - - authors know the first sentence of a novel has to catch the readers; imagination. So, if you (Original Post) 3Hotdogs 7 hrs ago OP
WTH just happened? 3catwoman3 7 hrs ago #1
"Where's Papa going with that ax?" -- One of my favorite opening lines, ever 68er 7 hrs ago #2
I agree! I loved that book so much! skylucy 6 hrs ago #3
One of my favorites is from 'Aztec' by Gary Jennings JoseBalow 5 hrs ago #6
John Irving dweller 6 hrs ago #4
This is NJCher 4 hrs ago #7
Roll up your sleeve! Mme. Defarge 6 hrs ago #5
"A Saturday afternoon in November was approaching the time of twilight, JoseBalow 3 hrs ago #8

68er

(23 posts)
2. "Where's Papa going with that ax?" -- One of my favorite opening lines, ever
Thu Jun 11, 2026, 12:00 AM
7 hrs ago

from Charlotte's Web, no less.

I try to keep it in mind everytime I begin a new narrative project, as well...

JoseBalow

(9,825 posts)
6. One of my favorites is from 'Aztec' by Gary Jennings
Thu Jun 11, 2026, 01:09 AM
5 hrs ago
"Of all that I have possessed in my life, my memories are the only things remaining to me."

dweller

(28,803 posts)
4. John Irving
Thu Jun 11, 2026, 12:23 AM
6 hrs ago

Once said he started with the last sentence , or paragraph,
and then worked backward to write his novels .

So I guess it can work both ways ?

🤔



✌🏻

NJCher

(43,695 posts)
7. This is
Thu Jun 11, 2026, 02:55 AM
4 hrs ago

Absolutely the best way. It is because you don’t know where your writing is going to take you.

JoseBalow

(9,825 posts)
8. "A Saturday afternoon in November was approaching the time of twilight,
Thu Jun 11, 2026, 03:45 AM
3 hrs ago
and the vast tract of unenclosed wild known as Egdon Heath embrowned itself moment by moment."

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