GoddessOfGuinness
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Tue Jul-25-06 11:30 PM
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I'll try posting this poem here... |
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Death sometimes comes in a dream Holding me tenderly, Whisp'ring the delights awaiting me In that ineluctable euphoria.
Too soon, when my waking nears, His lips caress my cheek, And Death gently implores my patience; Despite my desire, it is not yet my time.
The dream...the sweetness of it Loiters around my heart Until my mind begins to wonder If I'll have to nag him to take out the trash.
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Wed Jul-26-06 04:40 PM
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One in which dreams fade quickly into reality.
It is garbage day on my street today also.
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Wed Jul-26-06 04:44 PM
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2. Trash is least fun when it gets hot and humid outside! |
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Wed Jul-26-06 05:19 PM
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3. Life forms in agreeable weather |
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via a miraculous spontaneous generation process spring forth and soon become the trash.
All of it.
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GoddessOfGuinness
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Wed Jul-26-06 05:32 PM
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4. In it's turn, trash mulches the earth, |
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making new life and new growth possible. :D
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Fri Jul-28-06 12:26 AM
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Fri Jul-28-06 05:24 PM
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6. Nice! Gave me chills and not many do that. |
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Have you been reading Donne again?
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Sat Jul-29-06 11:55 AM
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that is a very nice poem!
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Thu Aug-17-06 02:09 AM
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Thanks for sharing; I like that very much. I am part of a fledgling writing group in my town that gets together and shares poetry we've written...I hope to soon be writing as well as you do. :)
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Mon Aug-21-06 07:26 PM
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9. My dear GoddessOfGuinness! |
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Very nice indeed!
I love the twist at the end!
:toast:
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