CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:00 PM
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My newest poem....**Caution! Erotic content!** |
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Such strength
The masculine facade
Sharp flashing eyes
Tender fingers and tongue
The man dominates me.
His body, his mind
Overcome me.
He strokes, and licks, and drinks me.
And then he enters
I open and yield myself
I surrender to his strength, his passion.
My mind is overcome with what I cannot tell...
But it’s wrong
I dominate him.
For at the last–who yields?
At the peak of passion
He empties the aching seed
Into me...
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:14 PM
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1. I think this is awesome Peggy |
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like I said
it puts me in a mood
and it reminds me of someone very special
and I will leave it there for now...
:hug: :hug:
blu
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:16 PM
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2. My dear Southpawkicker... |
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Thank you, sweetie...
Your thoughtful remarks mean a lot to me...
I hope the reminders and your mood aren't painful...
:hug: :hug:
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Fire Walk With Me
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:18 PM
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Are you sure that you're new to poetry? :)
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:20 PM
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Thanks, sweetie!
I've been writing it steadily for about the last year...
And I'm now taking a class in it, at my local community college...
There's life in this old dame yet!
:woohoo:
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Tuesday Afternoon
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:48 PM
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imagine finding you here :hi:
You "nailed" it this time ;)
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Nov-13-07 10:24 PM
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7. My dear Tuesday Afternoon! |
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Thank you, sweetie...
I think so too...
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Tue Nov-13-07 09:57 PM
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Nov-13-07 10:26 PM
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Oh, thank you, sweetie!
I thought it was one of my better ones...:hug:
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Tue Nov-13-07 11:32 PM
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9. For me, a dream come true. |
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Er, so to speak.... :evilgrin:
A different aspect of CaliforniaPeggy is revealed to the world. There's no going back.
Ain't it great! :toast:
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Nov-13-07 11:36 PM
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10. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six! |
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Thanks! This is a side I've always had....it's just hidden, most of the time!
I appreciate your kind remarks!
No going back is right!
:toast:
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Wed Nov-14-07 07:30 AM
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Your poem is great! I'm tonally swooning!
I open and yield myself
I surrender to his strength, his passion.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Nov-14-07 10:56 AM
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12. My dear Simply Fugue... |
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Thank you, sweetie...
I felt those words, and their truth, yesterday, in my poetry class...
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Wed Nov-14-07 04:10 PM
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I'll post some of my own someday
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Nov-14-07 04:19 PM
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14. My dear Rising Phoenix! |
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Glad you like it!
I'd love to see your work too...
:hug:
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Rising Phoenix
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Wed Nov-14-07 05:32 PM
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15. I'll post some tonight.... |
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Edited on Wed Nov-14-07 05:48 PM by Rising Phoenix
one for you...
The summertime has a different feel. Hot and sensuous Ecstasy radiates off Sweaty skin Kissed by gentle breeze and Perfumed by magnolias Raining petals over Laughing eyes That die in the Face of love
did that one about 15 years ago...what do you think
edited for spelling
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Nov-14-07 06:05 PM
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16. I like this one a lot! |
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Sad little twist at the end...
Very nice!
Thanks for sharing it...
I look forward to seeing some more...
:hug:
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Wed Nov-14-07 06:08 PM
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Thu Nov-15-07 01:24 PM
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18. Thank you for the link, Peggy! |
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What a fluid poem (pun NOT intended). The words are perfect.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Thu Nov-15-07 04:30 PM
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Oh, I'm so glad you like this!
I hear you about the pun...
Thank you!
:hug:
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Thu Nov-15-07 06:01 PM
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Erotic poetry is difficult for me, so I want to congratulate you for successfully composing such a piece.
I hope you find a place for this out in the world; erotica is very publishable right now.
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Thu Nov-15-07 07:46 PM
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Oh, thank you!
I really enjoy writing stuff like this...
So, you think it's publishable? I will explore this....
I really appreciate your remarks!
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Wed Nov-21-07 01:08 AM
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22. Penicillin will take care of that Aching seed.... |
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Wed Nov-21-07 01:10 AM
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You are too funny, as usual...
I hope you liked it....
:hi:
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