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Sat Feb-21-09 03:38 PM
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Edited on Sat Feb-21-09 03:41 PM by scubadude
From somewhere
Bee buzzing crystallized hummingbird
hanging lazy like in warm summer air
dipping back dipping back dipping back flower gives
off to somewhere
dipping back dipping back dipping back flower gives
young crying crystallized hummingbird
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Sat Feb-21-09 09:31 PM
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1. Attemp 2 of Flower Gives |
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Bee buzzing resolves into a hummingbird
hanging lazy like in warm summer air
dipping back dipping back dipping back flower gives
then off to nest
dipping back dipping back dipping back flower gives
young crying resolves into hummingbirds
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