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Mon Jun-15-09 11:47 PM
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Lust is an erect nipple
In your lover’s mouth
You arch your back
While he feeds on you
You nourish him
With your bounteous nipple
You fill him
With joy
As he drinks.
Funny
You are nourished
Too.
© MLC
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| NanceGreggs
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Tue Jun-16-09 12:42 AM
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... this place of which you speak.
It is a wondrous place, and it feeds the soul.
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| CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Jun-16-09 12:43 AM
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It is wondrous indeed....
I've been there too...
Thank you, sweetie...
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| Kind of Blue
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Tue Jun-16-09 01:43 AM
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| 3. I think your poem is incredibly hot |
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because it is incredibly true. Thank you.
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| CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Jun-16-09 01:51 AM
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What a terrific thing for you to say!
I thank you...
And, of course, I agree...
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Tue Jun-16-09 07:38 AM
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| 5. Good morning, California Peggy! |
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How do you do it?
:applause:
:donut:
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| CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Jun-16-09 09:59 AM
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How do I do it?
The words just show up, and demand loudly to be written down...
It's a mystery to me...
Thank you, sweetie...
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Tue Jun-16-09 08:53 AM
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Tue Jun-16-09 10:00 AM
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Ah, thank you!
Yup, steamy is just what showed up...so I went with it!
:hi:
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| J-Lo Biafra
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Tue Jun-16-09 01:09 PM
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| 9. "bounteous nipple" makes me think of Nancy Walker. |
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Tue Jun-16-09 02:59 PM
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| 10. My dear J-Lo Biafra... |
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Well, that's an unfortunate image. Sorry that's where my poem took you.
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Tue Jun-16-09 09:14 PM
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| 11. That is a great one CP !!!! +10 |
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Edited on Tue Jun-16-09 09:25 PM by UndertheOcean
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Tue Jun-16-09 09:24 PM
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| 12. My dear UndertheOcean! |
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I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!
I'll be reading it tonight at the open mic that I go to every week...
We'll see what they have to say!
Thank you, sweetie...
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Sat Jun-27-09 03:32 AM
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Sat Jun-27-09 10:40 AM
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| 14. Thank you, my dear byronius... |
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Mon Jun-29-09 09:29 AM
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Now I have to go take a cold shower!:evilgrin:
I'm trying my hand at Haiku. Woudl love it if you would take a look and tell me what you thing. I posted on the Haiku thread and one separately. Sure isn't as easy as it looks!
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Mon Jun-29-09 11:41 AM
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Ah, thank you! Glad you like it...
I did look at your Haiku thread, and there's no way in hell I can write that!
It doesn't look one bit easy to me...
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Mon Jun-29-09 11:56 AM
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| 17. I'm not sure I can either! lol! |
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Edited on Mon Jun-29-09 11:59 AM by dgibby
Can't hurt to try, though. At my age, I'll take risks (of embarassing myself) that I'd never have taken when I was younger! If it weren't for all the aches and pains, I could totally embrace being a serior citizen.
"Maxine" is my heroine!
Thanks for taking a look. Have no earthly idea what I'm doing, but it's fun, nonetheless!
:hi:
PS: I'm a Southerner, so have trouble limiting myself to only 3 lines!:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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