JitterbugPerfume
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Tue May-03-05 06:09 PM
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If I had a Love...by Jitterbug |
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Edited on Tue May-03-05 06:16 PM by JitterbugPerfume
If I had a love
when it came our time
To face eternity
I would wrap my arms and legs around him
and go into the fire
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it would not be possible
to seperate our essence--
and in a billion , billion years
when the sun explodes
and the earth
turns to dust
Some of those molecules
of carbon
flying out into the eternal darkness
would be my love and I
loving still------
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Tue May-03-05 06:13 PM
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nice thoughts Ms Jitterbug
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Tue May-03-05 06:17 PM
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Wed May-04-05 09:34 AM
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and with that love we shall live forever...
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Wed May-04-05 10:36 AM
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live forever
thanks for liking my poem
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Wed May-04-05 11:58 AM
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5. reminds me of a phoenix rising.... eternal |
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Wed May-04-05 09:33 PM
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I think everyone wishes they had a love like that :)
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Mon Oct-09-06 11:11 PM
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8. that is SOOO romantic... |
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eternal flames of love *sigh*
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Wed Sep-12-07 02:27 PM
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9. I'm gonna kick this because i love the sentiment, |
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and we need a lot more like it...Kudos
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