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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 08:54 AM
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Alter Ego
What is this thing that lives in me?
With woeful eyes that cannot see.
It moans and cries within my soul.
It shatters and shakes me
And leaves me cold.
It steals my ambition
It takes my will
And leaves me here,
Depressed and still.

180 Copyright 2004
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 12:16 PM
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1. Ego altered...

Keep it up...!
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 02:18 PM
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2. dark places
of the soul


<sigh>
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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 08:34 PM
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3. I would say that the speaker
has outsmarted the "thing that lives" in him, by exposing it.
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