KaliTracy
(1000+ posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Thu May-05-05 12:06 PM
Original message |
|
The Watchers ~ for C.
After school we take the forbidden sidewalk. We know we aren't supposed to walk here. We've been told that it's not the place where little girls should go for it's too far from the main road. But we found a secret path off to the side by a small stone wall. We hunch down behind a bush, listen for older girls to pass us, telling each other their stories and talking about boys. We always plan to scare them, but at the last minute hold our breath instead. As soon as they pass you get nervous. They came late today and you break through the weeds first, hurrying to get home. I stop for a moment, and hear a voice ~ he was watching, and makes you promise to never say anything to anyone for seeing him standing there. He was watching and I don't know if he saw me too, but you cry, he pushes your head to the side and makes you promise again. I wait for someone else to come, for you to say my name, but he leaves you standing with snot dripping from your nose, did he hurt you?
but you say nothing.
tracy lynn 1993
|
pinerow
(1000+ posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Thu May-05-05 12:11 PM
Response to Original message |
|
This is a bit troubling...you evoke a storm of emotions...
|
JitterbugPerfume
(1000+ posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Thu May-05-05 02:21 PM
Response to Reply #1 |
|
I only hope it is not a true life experience
|
KaliTracy
(1000+ posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Thu May-05-05 07:41 PM
Response to Reply #2 |
| 4. well, there might be some "poetic" license in what is created.... or |
oneighty
(1000+ posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Thu May-05-05 03:15 PM
Response to Original message |
|
Very scary. I have traveled a similar path. Long time ago.
180
|
Steel City Slim
(410 posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Fri May-06-05 10:54 AM
Response to Original message |
DU
AdBot (1000+ posts) |
Fri Oct 24th 2025, 02:44 PM
Response to Original message |