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Fri May-06-05 08:30 AM
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To the laundromat I took my clothes To wash them clean In those two quarter washing machines. Ten days I was on that hard luck boat My clothes and me we stink like goats.
Others are there just like me. I take a chair and wait my turn. I count ten machines against the wall Their glassy eyes are dirty clothes Going round and around in those soapy churns.
Long blond hair blue flashing eyes Adorn the girl sitting next to me. Not bashful a bit ten days at sea I smile at her hopefully. And we drink a Coke from the red machine.
"Hey" she says "I must go Would you mind please to watch my clothes?" "Sure" I say happily Planning ahead for later this day. I mean, aw what the heck. Ten days at sea.
Graceful she turns quick to leave Beautiful she is. I be hypnotized. Her long blond hair blue flashing eyes Bone white teeth red smiling lips. Her tight blue jeans caress curving hips.
"Wait." I say "Which are yours Which machines hold your clothes?" "Why" she say "All of them against the wall." "And here's some dimes to get them dry." "Okay." I say. Ten days at sea.
She clears the door out onto the street And with her goes one just like me. A shrimper-man lonely too. "Thanks" He says grinning wide. Aw! What the heck. Ten days at sea.
180 St Augustine Fla. 1980 perhaps.
From 'Voyages of the Vicky Mary' Copyright
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Fri May-06-05 10:40 AM
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Fri May-06-05 10:48 AM
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Sat May-07-05 12:02 AM
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I guess you had to spend some time at sea to fully appreciate it.
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Sat May-07-05 08:03 AM
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on a hard luck shrimp trawler where the Captain feared the ocean and we were slowly starving to death.
Sorta like 'The Sloop John D' I wanna go home this is the worst trip I ever been on.
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Sat May-07-05 09:07 AM
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| 5. A Captain Who Feared The Ocean? |
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That's a dangerous situation.
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Sat May-07-05 09:34 AM
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He could not swim. He feared the water. His daddy owned the boat and appointed him Captain.
In fact we stayed tied up at the dock most of my time with him waiting for calm weather, clear skies, smooth sailing and the bank foreclosure. hee hee hee
One thing I learned as a fisherman;
"Do not listen to marine forecasts or you will never leave the dock."
And you will go broke.
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Sat May-07-05 10:30 AM
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| 7. well, if I had been that girl |
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I would have left with YOU
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