Steel City Slim
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Fri May-06-05 11:09 AM
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I wrote this poem during a fucked up time in my life. I was drinking too much, smoking too much dope, I was having an afair with a married woman. I was a mess, and my life was a mess.
Saturday Night
The winter's cold And the hawk is flyin' And lies are bein' told And soon someone'll be cryin' But no one cares It's just a personal tradgedy Back door Johnny's runnin' scared And it's lonely on the street Find a doorway to huddle in Protect you from the night Ain't no way you'll ever win But still you gotta fight Give the man a nickle Get yourself real stoned But life is often fickle And you always wake up alone
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Fri May-06-05 11:30 AM
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| 1. I am reminded of a very cold winter... |
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Fri May-06-05 12:03 PM
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| 2. there is a lot here in these words -- much that can be |
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felt, much that makes the reader wonder.
thanks for sharing it.
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JitterbugPerfume
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Sat May-07-05 10:57 AM
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| 3. that kind of desolation |
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has to be experienced to be understood
yes it does
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Steel City Slim
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Sat May-07-05 11:54 AM
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