| Droopy  (1000+ posts)
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      Ignore | Tue May-10-05 02:46 AM Original message
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         Experience
 Now I’m not an old man,
 but I’ve gone a good piece.
 This wasn’t in my plan
 I wish aging would cease.
 
 I made many mistakes
 in the days of my youth.
 Often raising the stakes
 in my search for truth.
 
 There are some things
 that I wish I could change.
 But fond memory it brings.
 Does that sound so strange?
 
 And if I were to tell you
 there’s not much good in aging
 Would you think it true?
 Or inconsiderate presaging.
 
 Wisdom is sure to come
 with experience, its old mate.
 It’s not a good trade for some
 for years that are growing late.
 
 I wish I had thoughts profound
 about this old subject.
 Thoughts to amaze and astound
 before life presses eject.
 
 But all I have is this simple song,
 about what I have learned.
 No great words to pass along.
 No deep meaning to be discerned.
 
 
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    | oneighty  (1000+ posts)
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      Ignore | Tue May-10-05 09:42 AM Response to Original message
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    |  | three hundred twenty two wrinkles and ten hundred experiences for six of your months?
 Really old is not bad. Just terminal.
 
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    | Droopy  (1000+ posts)
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      Ignore | Tue May-10-05 01:55 PM Response to Reply #1
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    | 2. I thought that my poem might be controversial | 
  
    |  | after I posted it, but after consulting with my lawyer we decided to give it a go ;)
 I wish I could be permanently stuck at the age that I am right now. Went through a lot of hard times when I was younger. Wouldn't want to do that again. But I sure as hell don't want to get any older.
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    | oneighty  (1000+ posts)
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      Ignore | Tue May-10-05 02:53 PM Response to Reply #2
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    | 3. Your poem and thoughts | 
  
    |  | are just fine. 
 The alternative to growing old is often contemplated as well.
 
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    | KaliTracy  (1000+ posts)
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      Ignore | Tue May-10-05 09:09 PM Response to Original message
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    | 4. thank you.  don't forget..... each bite we take out of time can either be | 
  
    |  | swallowed quickly without tasting, or savored, as one who slowly eats a strawberry.   | 
  
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