oneighty
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Sat May-14-05 09:45 AM
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Edited on Sat May-14-05 09:58 AM by oneighty
The delta of the North and South Santee Rivers in South Carolina was once a great rice plantation. I ventured to Murphys Island there frequently. There are huge oak trees ,rice ponds, remains of old buildings and silence. Almost.
I see a land of Silken gowns Of burlap dresses And hunting hounds Of columned porches And dirty hovels Of leg of mutton And fat salt back Of bending knees And bleeding blacks.
And in fear
An icy chill wracks my spine The evil darkness clouds my mind Hair on end and pounding heart Short of breath a breathless shout Rubber knees and leaden feet I flee this island of silent hosts And leave it to its wandering ghosts.
If you went there you would see it too. I bet.
This was a very long poem. It was lost in a fire. I have these parts left in a dream book
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Sat May-14-05 11:41 PM
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1. very haunting. have you ever |
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tried to recreate what you lost -- not to be the same poem -- but to take a different look at the subject at hand?
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Mon May-16-05 11:52 AM
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I have felt that same way in similar situations. Last year at Gettysburg and Antietam I felt the souls of dead soldiers.
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Mon May-16-05 06:38 PM
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irrational fear
cool poem Ed
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