catbert836
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Thu Apr-13-06 07:19 PM
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| Where the Sea meets the Sky |
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Edited on Thu Apr-13-06 07:19 PM by catbert836
Often, I go to a shore where I can see the lake, and feel the wind’s breath on my face the waves’ sound on my ears the water’s sight on my eyes
There, I see the place where the sea meets the sky and the two elements meld rippling magically
I wonder what is out there where the sea meets the sky what mysterious realm exists there what creatures roam its invisible paths what shifting landscapes one could view
Some day, I will get up and leave the shore and walk across the water floating quietly
And if you want to find me after I’ve gone, just look to where the sea meets the sky
Written by yours truly :). What do you guys think? I'm only an amateur poet and writer, with no formal training so far.
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Mon Apr-24-06 08:36 PM
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Beautiful poem.
It made me remember a South American song, Alfonsina and the Sea.
For that, and for sharing your beautiful work, thank you.
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Thu May-04-06 05:21 PM
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And thanks so much! What you said means a lot. :pals:
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