Neoma
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Sun May-14-06 05:59 PM
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| This is the last poem i wrote: |
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Tulips playing chess, there she is in that pink dress. Wind carrying her into the sky, sunshine from her eyes. Bubbles thinking, and always drinking. Drunk from all the water.
Motion sickness, dripping wetness. Turtles flaunting their age. Roof-less houses, sinking under the waters depth. While the mermaids save their stereo sets.
Music hearing humans thinking, sings a song about them dreaming. Volcano's erupting, lava flowing into the coconut grove. Cave bats fluttering by, crossing elvish soundless toes.
Rainbows spilling all the gold, top hat bureaucrats striking back. Fishing for a drop of cotton candy, stars laughing at the moon.
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Rhiannon12866
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Tue Jun-06-06 08:36 AM
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| 1. Beautiful imagery. Thank you. |
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This paints so many colorful pictures in my head! And it's lovely.:D
Rhiannon:hi:
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Neoma
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Wed Jun-21-06 05:40 PM
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And thanks, at the same time. :)
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