TrogL
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Wed Sep-10-03 03:36 PM
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"honest ? Are"
No space after "honest". I see you're buying into the latest fad of one space after punctuation. This is incorrect and unreadable.
"Are electronic voting machines accurate and are the rules consistently applied?" run-on sentence
'There are only three possible answers to both questions. No. Maybe. Who knows ?'
s/b
There are only three possible answers to both questions; "No", "Maybe", or "Who knows".
"French Intelligence, your local"
French Intelligence or your local
"honest, here, it would " take out ", here,"
"and that includes everyone working for the company and everyone involved in the election process from state level to precinct level " s/b in brackets
"because it does and this could" - run on sentence
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