cssmall
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Tue Aug-30-05 09:38 PM
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To my sweet lady, my soul. |
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Wars never harmed you then, though some took your beat and others stole away the strands of your ephemeral violin.
The king's city was always too rich for the blood of the pulse. And, the violin that played in Atlanta was never your style, sweet lady.
But, little sister up the muddy banks always wanted to be just like you. There was nothing it could do, because, darlin', there was only one of you.
In your arms, it didn't matter who or what you welcomed, they were all the same. The true present of a multicolored spirit played on the wings of an angel.
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Tue Aug-30-05 09:39 PM
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Tue Aug-30-05 09:55 PM
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(quietly stepping away feeling as if i've intruded upon a star-crossed lover's midnite tryst)
sigh dp
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Tue Aug-30-05 10:04 PM
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But, it's an allowed affair, one I gained after a visit when I was 13.
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Tue Aug-30-05 10:37 PM
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War never harmed you, though some took your beat and other stole your ephemeral violin.
King city was too rich for the blood of the pulse. And, the dance that played in Atlanta was ne'er your style, sweet lady.
You see, litter sister up the muddy banks always wanted to be you. But, there ain't nothin' she could do, 'cause, darlin', there was only one a' you.
In your arms, it don't matter who or what you welcomed, there were all the same. The present of multicolored strands played from the chariot above.
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Wed Aug-31-05 01:01 AM
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5. oh, i like the original better |
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don't work on it. Let it be.
dp
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Wed Aug-31-05 01:09 AM
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6. Damn, I miss that place |
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I lived there for two years. Cried when I left. Nice - thank you.
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