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SarahB Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:17 AM
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Haikus anyone?
Here's four (a little sad):

I'm thinking of you
You made me simply ache
In so many ways



My night longs for you
We make love under the moon
Our pain kissed away



An alternate world
Is so very far away
It's what could have been




Reality screams
Of places I don't belong
Like nails in my soul
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ewagner Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:19 AM
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1. Awfully sad tonight?
Everything ok?
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SarahB Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:21 AM
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2. Not quite
But I will be. Eventually anyway.
Thanks. :)
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ewagner Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:24 AM
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3. Those Haikus
were quite striking....biographical or fantasy?
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SarahB Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:27 AM
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4. probably a bit of both
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Eye and Monkey Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:27 AM
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5. SarahBelle not quite
But will eventually
Anyway thanks smile
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Droopy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:28 AM
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6. Here you go
Thinking of you now
It was not too long ago
That we were lovers
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Don_G Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:30 AM
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7. Cat Haiku?
The rule for today
Touch my tail I shred your hand
New rule tomorrow

Grace personified
I leap into the window
I meant to do that

Terrible battle
I fought for hours Come and see
What's a "term paper?"

We're almost equals
I purr to show I love you
Want to smell my butt?
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NightTrain Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:34 AM
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8. OK, I'll give it a try
First five syllables
Then seven followed by five
Blah blah fucking blah

:P
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SnohoDem Donating Member (915 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:35 AM
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9. Well
SarahBelle sounds so sad
Maybe she'll feel better soon
I'm hoping she will

eh- not too great
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EstimatedProphet Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 12:54 AM
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10. OK, for my Saturday night
Bourbon on the rocks
Or maybe a single malt
drink drink drink drink drink
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arwalden Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 01:14 AM
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11. Leave It To Beaver
Leave It To Beaver
And you'll be sorry you did.
Boy's dumb as a stump


(not mine... but I like it.)
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Sapphocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 01:30 AM
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12. Here
You sound so depressed
Channel it outward instead
Why not flame a troll?
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fortyfeetunder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 02:10 AM
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13. Ain't Haiku with out a Dubya
Condi dilemma:
Am I the one for Dubya
Or maybe Laura?

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SarahB Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-23-04 02:47 AM
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14. More
Edited on Sun May-23-04 02:56 AM by SarahBelle
Tossing in my bed
Sleep eluding me this night
So much on my mind

Changed my mind on posting the other verses. Just too much. Wish I could edit this whole dumb thing. If your curious for whatever reason, let me know. :( Night.
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