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Mon Jul-26-04 03:22 PM
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| Please read my updated sig line and tell me what you think of it. |
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Mon Jul-26-04 03:23 PM
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| 1. no aphostrophe in reigns |
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Mon Jul-26-04 03:31 PM
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Mon Jul-26-04 03:44 PM
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| 3. Comma's in the wrong spot, misplaced capitalization |
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Edited on Mon Jul-26-04 03:45 PM by Argumentus
My two cents, for what it's worth. I'm a jerk, I know, but you asked for my honest opinion
When we get back the "Reigns of Power", we MUST make the "librul" media pay a SEVERE price for their attacks on OUR Country. We WILL Crack their balls and they will pay dearly for their actions.
When we get back the "reigns of power," we MUST make the "librul" media pay a SEVERE price for their attacks on OUR country. We WILL crack their balls -- they will pay dearly for their actions.
Or, even better:
When we get back the reigns of power, we must make the "librul" media pay a severe price for their attacks on our country. We will crack their balls -- they will pay dearly for their actions.
And maybe "crack their balls" isn't the post poetic of phrases.
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Mon Jul-26-04 04:01 PM
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It looks like you've cleaned up any punctuation issues. I share the exact same sentiments.:thumbsup:
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