Du'ers I need your creative help

[alfredo]

I have redone the Pledge of Allegiance, but I need help with the Lord's Prayer. I need input to finish it.

Here's the Pledge.


I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of Bushland
And to the Plutocrats who own us all, one nation controlled by
few, with nothing left over for us.

Here's what I have for the prayer, and the version I am using as a model.


Our father who art in Crawford
Dubya is thy name,

Thy empire stalled, Our army trapped, in Iraq and Afghanistan.
You taketh away our overtime pay. And give tax breaks to those rich who need none.




The version I am using below

Our Father, who art in heaven, Hallowed be thy Name. Thy kingdom come. Thy will be done, On earth as it is in heaven. Give us this day our daily bread. And forgive us our trespasses, As we forgive those who trespass against us. And lead us not into temptation, But deliver us from evil. For thine is the kingdom, and the power, and the glory, for ever and ever