listenup
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Fri Oct-31-03 11:01 PM
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Edited on Fri Oct-31-03 11:08 PM by listenup
Is there a difference between them and a soft place that wants to talk? Softness has its moments but softness walks much too easily and I don't know.
Should I care about the rock I'm between a rock or the soft place that speaks to me in moments I don't know. Tomorrow?
I can see that tomorrow has a hard place reserved for me I can see but the softness in my heart gives in easily and tomorrow is a warm place that my heart can live in saving face it speaks to me in all moments I know tomorrow Is for me. Tomorrow is for us I can see the softness becoming strong in a warm place that my heart can breathe in I know
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Fri Oct-31-03 11:08 PM
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1. on edit: I'll start my own thread instead. nt |
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Edited on Fri Oct-31-03 11:28 PM by Wonk
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Philostopher
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Fri Oct-31-03 11:10 PM
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2. Made me think of this one, from my kit bag (not sure why): |
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PREMONITION
Bends and breaking leave one twisted, Leave another curved, Arced into beauty, Bonsai, listed Into light, steel-nerved For each next moment, listening With each inch of life, Trembling on glistening Moment, silver knife of backbone, oh... so... ready.
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Fri Oct-31-03 11:16 PM
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3. I've never contributed to a midnight poetry thread so |
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tell me, is it 100% serious? Is humorous verse appropriate? I don't want to hijack a serious thread about poetry if it isn't appropriate.
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Fri Oct-31-03 11:21 PM
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Ain't worth a damn around here Guess I'll just hang out and drink some more beer that's what it's all about
Because I'm just killing time and it doesn't matter to me if you speak without rhyme it's all plain to see
We're all just hanging out wishing for a better world wishing there was no doubt waiting for the word
That will say all is well you can rise up out of your living hell and drink from the cup
That will release your soul release you from the anguish that's punishing your soul life free of punish
So now I'll let you go I'm here if you need me don't let the sadness show remember to be free
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Fri Oct-31-03 11:54 PM
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5. Cali's first rain (reign)... |
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The very last thing... I did last night, the very first thing this morning.
Was to stave the day to find a way... to keep the storm from forming.
From on a wood pile with first rain stains.... a wise owl lifts to space.
As he heads up to find the sun... there's gloomy in it's place.
:-(
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