MrScorpio
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Sun Aug-14-05 11:17 PM
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Write a scene for Season 6 of Six Feet Under |
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Edited on Sun Aug-14-05 11:24 PM by MrScorpio
(Yeah, I know that theres no "Season Six", but go with the flow here.)
Brenda is at the supermarket just with the kids. Muzak in the background. Just a mundane moment. As she's looking a the food on the aisle, she has a sad look on her face as she's thing about Nate.
The voice of a strange lady breaks Brenda from her trance. The stranger is an older looking caucasian lady, wearing a "Jesus is my President" tee shirt. She remarks on how pretty the baby is and what a blessing she is. Brenda, shaken a bit, says, "Ohhh, Thanks."
The lady then says that his father must be very proud of her. Brenda replies with, "No. her father has never seen her."
At that point, the stranger becomes self-righteous and tells Brenda that it's women like her that's destroying the families of America and that if she had been a better woman, her man would have never left her and her children. This pisses off Brenda, of course, who shouts back at the woman that their father was dead, killed by a brain hemorrhage. And that if has a problem with someone braking up her family, she ought to complain to her "President."
Brenda then stalks off, leaving behind a flabbergasted woman.
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LeftyDarthBrodie
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Sun Aug-14-05 11:21 PM
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1. Brenda's baby is a girl |
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but interesting scene none the less. I look forward to fan fiction after the show is over as I will dearly miss all of these characters.
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Sun Aug-14-05 11:25 PM
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Sun Aug-14-05 11:44 PM
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3. That seems more like a Claire situation/reaction. IMO. |
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Edited on Sun Aug-14-05 11:49 PM by countmyvote4real
I guess everybody dies eventually. Sad that a show that confronted clichés so consistently could end on such a big one.
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