The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 12/3/05)

[RetroLounge]

Yes Yes

when God created love he didn't help most
when God created dogs He didn't help dogs
when God created plants that was average
when God created hate we had a standard utility
when God created me He created me
when God created the monkey He was asleep
when He created the giraffe He was drunk
when He created narcotics He was high
and when He created suicide He was low

when He created you lying in bed
He knew what He was doing
He was drunk and He was high
and He created the mountians and the sea and fire at the same time

He made some mistakes
but when He created you lying in bed
He came all over His Blessed Universe.

Charles Bukowski

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Sometime you just need a little Bukowski, and today is one of those mornings... :D

RL

[WritingIsMyReligion]

1. Very nice poetry.

Thank ya for postin' it. :D :D

[RetroLounge]

6. You are most welcome

:hi:

RL

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear RetroLounge....

Do I see some double entendres in that last stanza? Hmmmmm....

VERY evocative...and erotic too...

Of course, I like it.......

Thank you.......

[RetroLounge]

3. You're welcome

:hi:

RL

[threehensandacow]

4. yes yes

you made me smile. but i'm sure you already knew that by now. thanks for the poetry, you little ray of sunshine.

[RetroLounge]

5. My Pleasure.

There will be more...

:hug:

RL

[RetroLounge]

7. Evening Kick

:kick:

RL