Craig3410
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:19 PM
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I need help: In a paper of mine, I'm trying to use "the upper class" to have a possessive, and I forgot if it's "the upper class's", "the upper class'", or something else I forgot.
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RebelOne
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:23 PM
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1. The proper use would be the upper class' |
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Edited on Fri Mar-17-06 12:24 PM by RebelOne
To make plural words possessive, add an apostrophe if the word ends in an s. If it is a proper name then you would use an apostrophe and s. I am sort of a grammar nazi as that's how I make my living. I am a copy editor.
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:30 PM
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Oeditpus Rex
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:23 PM
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2. What's the entire sentence? |
Craig3410
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:25 PM
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The taking of (usually the lower class') private property for (usually the upper class's) private for-profit use is distinctly Marxian; the class of the factory owners (the upper class) is taking the land of the factory workers (the middle- and lower-class).
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:29 PM
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4. I think there's a more basic problem with the sentence... |
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How is the upper class' control of the means of production "distinctly Marxian?" If anything, it's the opposite.
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Burma Jones
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Fri Mar-17-06 01:48 PM
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10. Maybe s/he meant Groucho |
Call Me Wesley
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:35 PM
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7. Besides, there's no 'middle class' in Marxist theory. (nt) |
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:50 PM
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8. I'd recast the entire sentence |
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It is distinctly Marxian for private property to be taken for private, for-profit use — usually from the lower and middle classes (the factory workers) by the upper class (the factory owners).
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:53 PM
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9. I would likewise rephrase the sentence |
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I think that the parentheses in this case sort of overwhelm the structure. Is it possible to omit some or all of them by rephrasing the sentence?
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Fri Mar-17-06 12:33 PM
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Edited on Fri Mar-17-06 12:38 PM by LynzM
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