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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:26 PM
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Be quiet
Edited on Wed Jun-28-06 10:28 PM by Tom Yossarian Joad
Can't you hear the souls go by?

Don't you see the children march?

Don't you hear the daughters

cry for their fathers?

Their brothers?

Their Mothers?


Be quiet.

Listen.

There's a war going on.
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MercutioATC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:30 PM
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1. Eeby geeby Gooby.
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TomInTib Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM
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4. And that would be code for what?
Just wondering.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:35 PM
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7. I got on a tangent one night and ended up taunting the mods...
with "eeby geebe gooby"

At the time, I thought I was being really witty.

I wasn't.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM
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5. LOL! You remember that?
Edited on Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM by Tom Yossarian Joad
Oh, shit. I was hoping no one did!

:toast:
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MercutioATC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:38 PM
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8. Yes, you bastard. And I still don't know what it means!
:mad:


;)
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TomInTib Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 11:03 PM
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15. I have learned not to drop my drawers in public.
Well, kinda.
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TomInTib Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:31 PM
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2. Damn, man. You are rolling tonight.
And you are killing me.

I read the last one to Sweetheart and barely got through it.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:39 PM
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9. Thanks, I appreciate that.
Things read harder when you read them out loud.
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TomInTib Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:44 PM
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11. That is my acid test. You can read great stuff all day long.
Edited on Wed Jun-28-06 10:46 PM by TomInTib
But put it in your own voice to someone (my sweet Beth) who knows from where you are speaking (and I know from where she is listening) and that is when it comes home.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:47 PM
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12. When I was married, I used to read my manuscripts to my wife and
there were many times when I got so choked up I couldn't do it.


I never realised it when I was writing it.

Odd.
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TomInTib Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 11:11 PM
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17. The voice in your head doesn't get what the voice in your soul
can do with timbre and pitch and emotional meter.

When the harmonic of your spoken word is rattling around in your head and mind/conscience and walking all over the words on the page, weird shit happens.

That's the shit what keeps me going.
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sweetheart Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM
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3. Do you hear the suffering
Its writers feeling others pain,
repeating it indignantly,
over and over for every body,
until the world remembers,
and all the while wondering
if they were forgiven.

There's no war going on.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:40 PM
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10. Nicely said, Sweetheart. Did you write that?
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sweetheart Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:53 PM
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13. You wrote that!
:-) I just was reminded of the words when i read your poem.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:55 PM
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14. Holy shit!
Damn, I like my shit!

Did I?

That was good!

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sweetheart Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 11:04 PM
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16. It is good
dancing with you, mate.

:-) :toast:
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Erika Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-28-06 10:34 PM
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6. But W is visiting Graceland Friday with the Japanese head guy
He is such an Elvis fan. What do you mean there is a war going on?

Would a U.S. president yuk it up in war time?
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