Tom Yossarian Joad
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:26 PM
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Edited on Wed Jun-28-06 10:28 PM by Tom Yossarian Joad
Can't you hear the souls go by?
Don't you see the children march?
Don't you hear the daughters
cry for their fathers?
Their brothers?
Their Mothers?
Be quiet.
Listen.
There's a war going on.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:30 PM
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM
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4. And that would be code for what? |
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:35 PM
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7. I got on a tangent one night and ended up taunting the mods... |
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with "eeby geebe gooby"
At the time, I thought I was being really witty.
I wasn't.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM
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5. LOL! You remember that? |
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Edited on Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM by Tom Yossarian Joad
Oh, shit. I was hoping no one did!
:toast:
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:38 PM
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8. Yes, you bastard. And I still don't know what it means! |
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Wed Jun-28-06 11:03 PM
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15. I have learned not to drop my drawers in public. |
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:31 PM
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2. Damn, man. You are rolling tonight. |
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And you are killing me.
I read the last one to Sweetheart and barely got through it.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:39 PM
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9. Thanks, I appreciate that. |
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Things read harder when you read them out loud.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:44 PM
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11. That is my acid test. You can read great stuff all day long. |
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Edited on Wed Jun-28-06 10:46 PM by TomInTib
But put it in your own voice to someone (my sweet Beth) who knows from where you are speaking (and I know from where she is listening) and that is when it comes home.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:47 PM
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12. When I was married, I used to read my manuscripts to my wife and |
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there were many times when I got so choked up I couldn't do it.
I never realised it when I was writing it.
Odd.
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Wed Jun-28-06 11:11 PM
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17. The voice in your head doesn't get what the voice in your soul |
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can do with timbre and pitch and emotional meter.
When the harmonic of your spoken word is rattling around in your head and mind/conscience and walking all over the words on the page, weird shit happens.
That's the shit what keeps me going.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:33 PM
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3. Do you hear the suffering |
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Its writers feeling others pain, repeating it indignantly, over and over for every body, until the world remembers, and all the while wondering if they were forgiven.
There's no war going on.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:40 PM
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10. Nicely said, Sweetheart. Did you write that? |
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:53 PM
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:-) I just was reminded of the words when i read your poem.
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:55 PM
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Damn, I like my shit!
Did I?
That was good!
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Wed Jun-28-06 11:04 PM
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dancing with you, mate.
:-) :toast:
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Wed Jun-28-06 10:34 PM
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6. But W is visiting Graceland Friday with the Japanese head guy |
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He is such an Elvis fan. What do you mean there is a war going on?
Would a U.S. president yuk it up in war time?
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