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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-01-06 02:48 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 8/1/06)
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Reading a used book on evolution I wonder
about fingerprints, how long they live.
Were the fingers licked before the pages
were turned, did the owner
of the book, of the fingerprints
read in the bathroom, will there be a hair
on page 231, on a train, did he take the C
uptown, did she eat lunch with the pigeons
and hold the book open with her foot
as she sat cross-legged on the lawn
of the Municipal Building, a short hair,
curly and black or blond and straight
and long as my finger? Was she reading
instead of getting her license on the day
she'd promised to, after five months
of dreading the DMV, instead
of looking into the bill for lab tests,
one hundred and seventy seven dollars
to peek into her blood, her urine,
instead of calling the furnace guy
and dealing with his boots on the carpet,
with his mouth moving in front of hers,
with the expectation of small talk,
did the book keep her from visiting
her mother and asking about the MS,
did he hold the book between his face
and his wife, is it how he asked
for a divorce, by not speaking, by saying
the name Leaky over and over to himself,
by letting the pages stand in for his face?
Will I become everyone who read this book,
did their eyes change the letters,
is reading a sexual act, is there congress
between the text and my gaze,
is there no mirror left me but words,
why am I afraid of people, why do I talk
behind them to the edge of their shadows,
why did the continents drift, why didn't
the thumb stay put, is fear what it means
to be human, am I what it means to be human,
why did the brain ransom the heart
to the mouth, why did we ever come down
from the trees?

Bob Hicok

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-01-06 08:30 AM
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1. Good morning
That poem asks too many questions. :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-01-06 11:00 AM
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3. not too many, but a lot...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-01-06 09:50 AM
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2. Good morning, my dear RetroLounge..........
Wow, this is a very good poem!

All the questions of the world, in one poem........

It is so beautifully written......

It just flows along, and takes me with it, in its compelling rhythms.....

Thank you.....

:loveya:

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-01-06 11:01 AM
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4. ...
:hug:

RL
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-01-06 09:22 PM
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5. kick
:kick:

RL
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