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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-22-07 08:18 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 2/22/2007)
This Was Once a Love Poem

This was once a love poem,
before its haunches thickened, its breath grew short,
before it found itself sitting,
perplexed and a little embarrassed,
on the fender of a parked car,
while many people passed by without turning their heads.

It remembers itself dressing as if for a great engagement.
It remembers choosing these shoes,
this scarf or tie.

Once, it drank beer for breakfast,
drifted its feet
in a river side by side with the feet of another.

Once it pretended shyness, then grew truly shy,
dropping its head so the hair would fall forward,
so the eyes would not be seen.

It spoke with passion of history, of art.
It was lovely then, this poem.
Under its chin, no fold of skin softened.
Behind the knees, no pad of yellow fat.
What it knew in the morning it still believed at nightfall.
An unconjured confidence lifted its eyebrows, its cheeks.

The longing has not diminished.
Still it understands. It is time to consider a cat,
the cultivation of African violets or flowering cactus.

Yes, it decides:
many miniature cacti, in blue and red painted pots.

When it finds itself disquieted
by the pure and unfamiliar silence of its new life,
it will touch them-one, then another-
with a single finger outstretched like a tiny flame.

Jane Hirshfield

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul



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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-22-07 08:46 AM
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1. *Sigh*
The longing has not diminished.

I think there are many of us who waiting for another love poem.

:hi: :hug:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-22-07 10:54 AM
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2. used to be good times:
Once, it drank beer for breakfast,
drifted its feet
in a river side by side with the feet of another.

and now it is just time:
Still it understands. It is time to consider a cat,
the cultivation of African violets or flowering cactus.

time...
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-22-07 02:40 PM
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3. My dear Retro!
Ah, how love changes as we age..........

Quite beautiful, this poem, in its uncertainty.......

Thank you........

Reminds me of "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock..."

:hug:
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