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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:05 AM
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Why do they have to say "gunned down?!" Your "journalism" pet peeves
It's not "shot." It's "gunned down."

I detest sensationalism.
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Forkboy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:06 AM
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1. Anything good is "a miracle".
One guy could live out of hundred in a plane crash and it's a miracle.What,God didn't have the ability to perform a miracle for the other 99 people? :puke:
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Oeditpus Rex Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 11:33 AM
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21. The guy who runs TestyCopyEditors.com
who's chief of the business copy desk at the Washington Post, has a mantra:

"There is NO SUCH THING as a 'miracle.' There is NO SUCH THING as a 'miracle.' There is NO SUCH THING as a 'miracle.'"

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reyd reid reed Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:10 AM
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2. Mine is a more of a gray area...
"an historic moment" makes me crazy. I realize that technically it's correct, but it makes me squirm every time I hear it.

Other than that, all the cliches and lousy puns irritate me. It's not like they're doing this on the fly -- they've got copy. Lose the lousy puns. At least minimize them. One or two a week might be tolerable, maybe even funny. One or two a newscast gets on my last nerve.

Oh...and errors in the graphics. Inexcusable.
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johnnie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:19 AM
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3. I can understand the use of the term "alleged", but...
Sometimes it is a little beyond silly. For example "The man was shot in the head four time. The alleged victim's name is unknown at this time". Or, "We have security video of the man who robbed the bank. The alleged robber is in county jail".
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SteppingRazor Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:48 AM
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7. Well, that one's a legal thing.
You've gotta refer to a suspect as an "alleged murderer" or whathaveyou until after he or she is found guilty — no matter how obviosu the guilt may be.
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johnnie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:51 AM
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8. Or you don't have to say "alleged"
"We have security footage of the man robbing the bank. The man is in custody."

Like I said, I understand the use, it just bugs me that it is overused.
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SteppingRazor Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:54 AM
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9. Gotcha n/t
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reyd reid reed Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:55 AM
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10. You can't
unequivocally say that he robbed the bank. It is a legal thing, whether he's on tape or not. Innocent until proven guilty in a court of law and all that.

What they *can* say instead is something like, "security footage of the man the authorities believe to be..." or "security footage of what appears to be the suspect...."
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johnnie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:06 AM
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13. Lol
I thought twice about putting the robber example in, but I did it anyway.

My big peeve is more of the first example. I have heard "the alleged victim" more than a few times and it drives me nuts.

Like I said, I understand what "alleged" means and why it should be used, but they over-use for things that are extremely obvious. That was my point, and it is a journalism peeve. :)
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GenDem Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:01 AM
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11. And another is the dreaded...
"Person of interest"
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Left Is Write Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:08 AM
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14. That's what the police call them - don't blame the journalist.
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johnnie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:11 AM
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15. Yeah
That's the new fad.
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Orrex Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:25 AM
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4. I have several
Edited on Tue Mar-06-07 09:36 AM by Orrex
"On the ground" always seems overblown. As in "We had a team of investigators on the ground even as Anna Nicole's body was laid to rest."

I hate it when "meteorologists" describe snow as "the white stuff."

For that matter, I hate it that every network's weather team is called The Severe Weather Center or something similarly dire. When it's sunny and 70 degrees, I don't need to hear it from any Severe team.

And I hate the whole hyperdramatic freshman-year-stage-production tone that every on-the-scene reporters adopts. It's close to impossible to reproduce in print, but just about every reporter uses it.


Aaaargh! So much to bitch about!
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:25 AM
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5. Ah, yes. Weather.
Three raindrops in Southern California and it's Storm Watch! 2007!
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Wcross Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:45 AM
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6. "boyfriend" or "girlfriend" in a story such as this......
A man remained in jail Monday after Tampa police say he ripped off a large portion of his girlfriend's scalp with a 6-inch kitchen knife.

After the Friday attack, 40-year-old Tina D. Robinson was rushed to St. Joseph's Hospital, where surgeons attempted to reattach her scalp. Hospital officials would not comment on her condition Monday.

Police say Robinson and her 30-year-old boyfriend Jason Eric Tarvin had been drinking Thursday night and were intoxicated when an argument got violent.

(THANKS MATCOM FOR THE LINK)

Sorry, a 40 year old is not a "girl" and a thirty year old is not a "boy".

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emmajane67 Donating Member (401 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:45 AM
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17. Also, chances are he ain't her boyfriend anymore!
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Wcross Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 11:19 AM
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18. Hey, who wants to date a woman with a patch of missing hair?
Yup, I wouldn't want to date her anymore looking like that! (Yes, I am being sarcastic)
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MorningGlow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:05 AM
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12. "War-torn"
Makes me NUTS. "War-torn Iraq"..."war-torn (insert any of several African nation here)". Please--there must be some other way of drawing concern that a country's been shredded by bombs and fighting. (Note: I'm not saying they shouldn't say a country's been devastated by war--but they should vary their terms!)
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InternalDialogue Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 10:14 AM
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16. I cringe at television anchors' omission of helping verbs.
It's pandemic on local news, but it's even creeping into national newscasts.

E.g., "Local police tonight following up leads on yesterday's crime spree."

or, "The mayor taking questions from concerned residents tonight."

For that matter, I cringe at the use of present tense for stories that clearly have already happened.


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skygazer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 11:23 AM
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19. Romp
"Britney's gay romp"

What the hell - the mainstream press is about the same as tabloid journalism these days. :shrug:
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dolo amber Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 11:31 AM
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20. When newscasters either don't know, or don't bother checking
whether the (incorrect) name they're calling a white supremacist group is the same as a very well known rap group who was very politically active in promoting black power? :shrug:

http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=view_all&address=105x6271925

*Not intending to threadjack here, but I saw the title of your thread after I posted that. :D
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GenDem Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 12:58 PM
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22. Just heard this on MSNBC --"gaggle"
as in "gaggle of reporters"
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