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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-11-07 06:49 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 7/11/2007)
Black Umbrellas

On a rainy day in Seattle stumble into any coffee shop
and look wounded by the rain.
Say Last time I was in I left my black umbrella here.
A waitress in a blue beret will pull a black umbrella
from behind the counter and surrender it to you
like a sword at your knighting.
Unlike New Englanders, she'll never ask you
to describe it, never ask what day you came in,
she's intimate with rain and its appointments.
Look positively reunited with this black umbrella
and proceed to Belltown and Pike Place.
Sip cappuccino at the Cowgirl Luncheonette on First Ave.
Visit Buster selling tin salmon silhouettes
undulant in the wind, nosing ever into the oncoming,
meandering watery worlds, like you and the black umbrella,
the one you will lose on purpose at the day's end
so you can go the way you came
into the world, wet looking.

Rick Agran

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-11-07 07:13 AM
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1. Shows the difference in a few miles
:thumbsup:
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-11-07 09:53 AM
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2. the rain the vehicle -- the umbrella the medium of exchange.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-11-07 10:43 AM
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3. Good morning, my dear Retro!
The umbrella and the rain....almost metaphors for birth, and life...

Of course it's beautiful!

Thank you, sweetie! :hug:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-11-07 11:55 AM
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4. excellent for so many reasons
luncheonette
silhouette

:loveya:

undulant in the wind
meandering watery worlds

:loveya:

thanks for another fine poem:hi:
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