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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-26-07 11:39 PM
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**A Poem for Tonight**
She is drying her hair

That tangled wet mess

After bathing


I watch as she pulls

All the snarls away

Her arm moves endlessly


She leans her head into the blowing heat

And her hair ripples and flows

The waves fall over me as I kiss her


She floats above me

In our bed

I feel her hair everywhere

Over my face, over my chest, over my thighs...


She is soft and yielding

I bury my face in her hair

How I love her


The perfume envelopes me

I am transported

The shining waves

Like birds in flight

Like our love...





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VenusRising Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-26-07 11:42 PM
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1. Beautiful, CaliforniaPeggy!
Wonderful imagery.

:loveya::hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-26-07 11:46 PM
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2. My dear VenusRising!
Oh, thank you, sweetie!

Glad you like it......

:loveya: :hug:
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liberaltrucker Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-26-07 11:49 PM
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3. Wheew! Crank up the AC!
Getting a bit, uh, warm!

:blush:

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:30 AM
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9. My dear liberaltrucker!
Oh, I don't think it's that steamy!

Glad you enjoyed it........:hug:
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Blue-Jay Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-26-07 11:51 PM
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4. That's a very bold poem.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:30 AM
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11. My dear Blue-Jay...
And I thank you!

:hug:
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fizzgig Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:00 AM
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5. wow peggy
Edited on Fri Jul-27-07 12:00 AM by kagehime
that is intense! i love it
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:32 AM
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12. My dear kagehime...
Yeah, I really felt the intensity as I wrote it......

I also felt completely natural writing from the man's point of view as well......

Glad you love it, sweetie! :hug:

Thank you...
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S n o w b a l l Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:02 AM
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6. That is gorgeous Peggy...
Really nice. :)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:33 AM
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13. My dear Engi!
Oh, thank you, sweetie!

Glad you enjoyed it...:hug:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:11 AM
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7. very nice peg
and for the first time in a long time i feel that feeling too!

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:34 AM
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14. My dear Southpawkicker........
Aw, sweetie........glad you enjoyed this one...

It is a nice feeling, isn't it?

Thank you...:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:20 AM
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8. And you're worried about not ever being published....
You can put that fear to rest. It WILL happen with works like that one.

Beautiful.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:36 AM
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15. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six...
You really think so?

Oh, how much I hope you're right....

Thank you so much...

It just comes out of me after I open the door....

It's effortless.

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:30 AM
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10. C-Peg!
That's great!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:37 AM
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16. My dear BlueIris...
Glad you think so, sweetie!

Thank you...:hug:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:37 AM
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17. You sure you are not gay?
Kidding!

:)
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:39 AM
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18. Hey, back off, KW! C-Peg is MINE!
Also kidding.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:39 AM
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19. My dear KitchenWitch!
LOL!

Hardly!

You made me laugh out loud, sweetie!

I hope you enjoyed it.....

:hug:

:rofl: :rofl:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:40 AM
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20. I did!
Sorry about the flippant humor!

:silly:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:45 AM
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21. No need to be sorry, sweetie!
I am still laughing.......

And I'm so pleased you like this!

:hug:
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Lionel Mandrake Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:02 AM
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22. I didn't know a hair dryer could be so steamy.
Just kidding. ;-)

This is another beautiful poem by my favorite poet.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:05 AM
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23. My dear Lionel Mandrake!
LOL!

I didn't know it either....till I wrote it...

Glad you like it, sweetie!

I am honored....:hug:
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blondie58 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:35 PM
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24. very SEXY poem, California Peggy!
but nice! Good job- and you haven't even started class yet- you'll do fine- why, you'll probably blow the teacher away!

Hey, I tried to respond to your other thread, but it was locked.

I just wanted to add that it took me a long time to realize that not everyone is going to like me. I always had a hard time with that, 'cause I'm just so darn likable! (inmh!)

I'm sorry about your friend- but really, it is their loss and if they are going to be petty and immature, that is their problem. And please keep in mind that perhaps it isn't anything that YOU have done, but rather circumstances in their individual life at this time.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:57 PM
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25. My dear blondie58!
Well, I do appreciate all of your very kind remarks, sweetie!

I hope to do well in my class.....

Writing on demand has never been my strong suit...

And thank you as well for your illuminating comments on my other thread...

Your point on where the other person might be coming from is something I hadn't considered...

I appreciate your insight!

Glad you liked my poem...


:hug:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 12:59 PM
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26. I do love that "perfume"
yummy!

:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:07 PM
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29. My dear Inchworm!
Oh, thank you, sweetie!

I'm so pleased that you like my little poem...

:hug:
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Parche Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:04 PM
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27. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy
That is a good one!! :hi:

Your poem inspired me so much, I will post this one........

Roses are red.....

For years and years they told me, Be careful of your breasts. Don't ever squeeze or bruise them. And give them monthly tests.
So I heeded all their warnings, And protected them by law. Guarded them very carefully, And I always wore my bra.

After 30 years of astute care, My doctor found a lump. She ordered up a mammogram, To look inside that bump. "Stand up very close" she said. As she got my boob in line, "And tell me when it hurts" she said. "Ah yes! There, that's fine.

She stepped upon a pedal. I could not believe my eyes! A plastic plate pressed down and down, My boob was in a vise!

My skin was stretched and stretched, From way up under my chin. My poor boob was being squashed, To Swedish pancake thin.

Excruciating pain I felt. Within it's vice-like grip. A prisoner in this viscous thing, My poor defenseless tit!

"Take a deep breath" she said to me, Who does she think she's kidding? My chest is mashed in her machine, And woozy I am getting.

"There, that was good," I heard her say As the room was slowly swaying. "Now, let's have a go at the other one." Lord have mercy I was praying.

It squeezed me from up and down. It squeezed me from both sides. I'll bet she's never had this done, Not to her tender little hide!

If I had no problem when I came in, I surely have one now. If there had been a cyst in there, It would have popped, "ker-pow!"

This machine was created by a man, Of this, I have no doubt. I'd like to stick his balls in there, And see how they come out!

:rofl: :rofl: :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:13 PM
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31. My dear Parche!
Wow, thank you!

I love your poem! I've seen it, but not in a while...It's hilarious!

Thanks for posting!



:rofl: :rofl: :hi:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:06 PM
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28. Very nice
:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:14 PM
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32. My dear BarenakedLady...
Thank you, sweetie...Glad you like it!

:loveya:
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MissMillie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:08 PM
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30. Why do I get the feeling I know what you'll be doing tonight?
That's pretty erotic!







(Is it hot in here?)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:17 PM
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33. My dear MissMillie!
Oh, you never know!:evilgrin:

Glad you like it...

Funny how something can be erotic without being graphic, isn't it?

Thanks...:hug:
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MissMillie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:20 PM
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34. The best stuff always leaves room for the imagination!
:hi:
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redqueen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:33 PM
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35. oh that is so nice
*sigh*

very very nice, CalPeg.

SO nice.

Wow... heh... that really got me feeling... :7
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:39 PM
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36. My dear redqueen...
Ah, sweetie...

I'm glad this got you feeling.....

We need to feel like this now and then...

It sparks our life, doesn't it?

Thank you...

I'm pleased you like my little work!

:hug:
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redqueen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-27-07 01:51 PM
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37. Yes we do!
But I feel like that most of the time anyway... so you just made it worse. :P

I'm pleased you shared it... it really is very nice!
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