BlueIris
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Sun Sep-23-07 10:03 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poem Thread, 9/23/07 Bonus |
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Edited on Sun Sep-23-07 10:04 PM by BlueIris
"To A Sad Daughter"
All night long the hockey pictures gaze down at you sleeping in your tracksuit. Belligerent goalies are your ideal.
Threats of being traded cut and wounds —all this pleases you. O my god! you say at breakfast reading the sports page over the Alpern as another player breaks his ankle or assaults the coach.
When I thought of daughters I wasn't expecting this but I like this more. I like all your faults even your purple moods when you retreat from everyone to sit in bed under a quilt. And when I say 'like' I mean of course 'love' but that embarrasses you. You who feel superior to black and white movies (coaxed for hours to see Casablanca) though you were moved by Creature from the Black Lagoon.
One day I'll come swimming beside your ship or someone else will and if you hear the siren listen to it. For if you close your ears only nothing happens. You will never change.
I don't care if you risk your life to angry goalies creatures with webbed feet. You can enter their caves and castles their glass laboratories. Just don't be fooled by anyone but yourself.
This is the first lecture I've given you. You're 'sweet sixteen' you said. I'd rather be your closest friend than your father. I'm not good at advice you know that, but ride the ceremonies until they grow dark.
Sometimes you are so busy discovering your friends I ache with a loss —but that is greed. And sometimes I've gone into my purple world and lost you.
One afternoon I stepped into your room. You were sitting at the desk where I now write this. Forsythia outside the window and sun spilled over you like a thick yellow miracle as if another planet was coaxing you out of the house —all those possible worlds!— and you, meanwhile, busy with mathematics.
I cannot look at forsythia now without loss, or joy for you. You step delicately into the wild world and your real prize will be the frantic search. Want everthing. If you break break going out not in. How you live your life I don't care but I'll sell my arms for you, hold your secrets forever.
If I speak of death which you fear now, greatly, it is without answers. except that each one we know is in our blood. Don't recall graves. Memory is permanent. Remember the afternoon's yellow suburban annunciation. Your goalie in his frightening mask dreams perhaps of gentleness.
—Michael Ondaatje
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Sun Sep-23-07 10:08 PM
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I know some dads have a hard time expressing such feelings, mine being one of them. I'm afraid that I've inherited that trait from him.
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Sun Sep-23-07 10:56 PM
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3. I also have one of those dads. That's one reason I think this is such a great piece. |
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Sun Sep-23-07 10:15 PM
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2. that is beautiful. and these lines --- |
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'One day I'll come swimming beside your ship or someone else will and if you hear the siren listen to it. For if you close your ears only nothing happens. You will never change.'
so true. i like the way he used yellow...its a yellow poem :)
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Sun Sep-23-07 11:44 PM
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4. This is really beautiful |
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Brilliant use of language, very evocative.
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Mon Sep-24-07 12:40 AM
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5. I think Michael Ondaatje, like his contemporary, Margaret Atwood, wrote excellent poems |
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as well as excellent novels.
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