La Lioness Priyanka
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Tue Jan-15-08 01:44 PM
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I wish I were a less brusque writer. |
Dr. Strange
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Tue Jan-15-08 01:46 PM
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1. I wish you were a more risque writer. |
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sigh indeed
What did you do now?
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La Lioness Priyanka
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Tue Jan-15-08 01:49 PM
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2. i just have trouble elaborating |
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Edited on Tue Jan-15-08 01:50 PM by lionesspriyanka
its like i cover point A, point B and point C.
but i cant really make it flow into a story.
its a great writing style for papers but not for something personal
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Tue Jan-15-08 06:12 PM
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7. Pretend that you're getting paid per word. |
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Tue Jan-15-08 01:59 PM
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3. I think your writing has great humanity, |
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Tue Jan-15-08 02:56 PM
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4. I've never noticed your brusqueness |
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or, is it when you're not on DU?
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Tue Jan-15-08 02:56 PM
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5. I've never noticed your brusqueness |
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or, is it when you're not on DU?
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Tue Jan-15-08 04:36 PM
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6. I wish you were a burlesque writer |
Starbucks Anarchist
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Tue Jan-15-08 08:00 PM
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8. I could possibly help you with that. |
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Tue Jan-15-08 08:13 PM
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9. You're not. Get over it. |
La Lioness Priyanka
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Tue Jan-15-08 08:30 PM
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