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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-18-08 09:59 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 5/18/2008)
May Day

I've decided to waste my life again,
Like I used to: get drunk on
The light in the leaves, find a wall
Against which something can happen,

Whatever may have happened
Long ago—let a bullet hole echoing
The will of an executioner, a crevice
In which a love note was hidden,

Be a cell where a struggling tendril
Utters a few spare syllables at dawn.
I've decided to waste my life
In a new way, to forget whoever

Touched a hair on my head, because
It doesn't matter what came to pass,
Only that it passed, because we repeat
Ourselves, we repeat ourselves.

I've decided to walk a long way
Out of the way, to allow something
Dreaded to waken for no good reason,
Let it go without saying,

Let it go as it will to the place
It will go without saying: a wall
Against which a body was pressed
For no good reason, other than this.

Phillis Levin


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:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-18-08 10:07 AM
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-18-08 09:03 PM
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-18-08 11:15 AM
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2. Awwww. Reminds me of Edna St. Vincent Millay's "Intention to Escape from Him." nt
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-18-08 07:19 PM
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3. My dear Retro!
All I can say is, if you can waste your life writing poetry like that...

Well, more power to ya!

This is beautiful...

I'm struggling with a big one of my own...

I rather doubt it will be this great!

Thank you...

:hi:
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