JVS
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Tue May-27-08 02:34 PM
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The dead swans lay in the stagnant pool. They lay. They rotted. They turned Around occasionally. Bits of flesh dropped off them from Time to time. And sank into the pool's mire. They also smelt a great deal.
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Tue May-27-08 02:35 PM
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1. Sheer brilliance! Rec'd!!!! |
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:thumbsup:
Now do one about ducks.
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Wed May-28-08 12:17 PM
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11. i can't. I'm still spent from writing that one |
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Tue May-27-08 02:36 PM
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2. Be still my pounding heart. |
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Tue May-27-08 02:38 PM
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the whole thing.... very descriptive
and my dog even farted to add smellyvision to it
powerful..... (the fart)
:hi:
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Tue May-27-08 02:38 PM
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4. Not bad, but it needs a little sex in there somewhere. |
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Tue May-27-08 02:40 PM
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5. "A little sex"? It's nothing but sex. |
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Tue May-27-08 02:52 PM
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6. I stand corrected; indeed, it is a necrophiliac-beastialist's paradise. |
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Tue May-27-08 02:53 PM
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