BlueIris
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Wed Jun-04-08 07:25 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 6/4/08 |
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Edited on Wed Jun-04-08 07:26 AM by BlueIris
"For K."
Then Kathy—"Is that mine?"—ran out to the crying in the yard.
—Carol Snow
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BlueIris
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Wed Jun-04-08 12:59 PM
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1. Kick. Doesn't anyone like my little poem here? |
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Wed Jun-04-08 01:06 PM
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2. It's nice...but I'm not sure that many people think that's a poem. |
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Oh well...more poem for me.
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Wed Jun-04-08 01:24 PM
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C'mon, Loungers. Think creatively.
The poems for the rest of this month are really something else, so get ready.
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Wed Jun-04-08 01:44 PM
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4. It's the opposite of my writing... |
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I like super-long (10-15+ word) lines in the tradition of Ginsburg. I also dig the coy use of punctuation to suggest opposing thoughts simultaneously. I once ended a poem in the middle of a word. Wrote one using pretty-much only the word "blockage" repeatedly. (I think there were 7 other words.)
Different poem forms excite me.
That reminds me...we haven't had a "Post your poetry" thread in a while.
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Wed Jun-04-08 02:13 PM
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5. Ooh, bring it on. I have a couple of little blurbs I could throw up. |
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And if you like different poetic forms, stay tuned. I play with forms in...interesting ways the rest of this month.
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