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Wed Jun-18-08 06:30 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 6/18/2008) |
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A Kiss
One wave falling forward meets another wave falling forward. Well-water, hand-hauled, mineral, cool, could be a kiss, or pastures fiery green after rain, before the grazers. The kiss — like a shoal of fish whipped one way, another way, like the fever dreams of a million monkeys — the kiss carry me — closer than your carotid artery — to you.
Thomas Lux
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Wed Jun-18-08 06:55 AM
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nice one Retro. I think I may have heard of Thomas Lux before. ;)
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Wed Jun-18-08 06:14 PM
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Wed Jun-18-08 08:46 AM
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Well-water, hand-hauled, mineral, cool, could be a kiss, or pastures fiery green after rain, before the grazers.
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Wed Jun-18-08 06:14 PM
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Wed Jun-18-08 09:10 AM
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3. Hey! Monkeys! Cool beans. |
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Can't beat the poems about monkeys.
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Wed Jun-18-08 06:15 PM
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7. Monkey are very poetic indeed! |
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Wed Jun-18-08 11:11 AM
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Ah.....kisses!
Love it!
Great imagery...
Thank you!
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Wed Jun-18-08 06:15 PM
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