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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-22-08 04:12 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 6/22/2008)
Two Bikers Embrace on Broad Street

Maybe, since you're something like me,
you, too, would've nearly driven into oncoming traffic
for gawking at the clutch between the two men
on Broad Street, in front of the hospital,
which would not stop, each man's face
so deeply buried in the other's neck--these men
not, my guess, to be fucked with--squeezing through
that first, porous layer of the body into the heat beneath;
maybe you, too, would've nearly driven over three pedestrians as your head
swiveled to lock on their lock,
their burly fingers squeezing the air from the angels
on the backs of their denim jackets
which reminds you the million and one secrets exchanged
in nearly the last clasp between your father
and his brother, during which the hospital's chatter and rattle
somehow fell silent in deference to the untranslatable
song between them, and just as that clasp endured through
what felt like the gradual lengthening of shadows and the emergence
of once cocooned things, and continues to this day, so, too,
did I float unaware of the 3000 lb machine
in my hands drifting through a stop light while I gawked
at their ceaseless cleave going deeper,
and deeper still, so that Broad Street from Fairmount
to the Parkway reeked of the honey-scented wind
pushed from the hummingbirds now hovering above these two men,
sweetening, somehow, the air until nectar,
yes, nectar gathered at the corners of my mouth like sun-colored spittle,
the steel vehicle now a lost memory
as I joined the fire-breasted birds in listening
to air exchanged between these two men, who are, themselves,
listening, forever, to the muscled contours of the other's neck, all of us
still, and listening, as if we had nothing
to blow up, as if we had nothing to kill.

Ross Gay

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:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-22-08 11:25 AM
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1. My dear Retro...
Oh, sweetie...

This is perfect...

And not just in itself...

But for all the gay marriages that are now happening all over California!

But also for the stunning imagery, the way the images flow out of one another, the way we see these men embracing...

Just beautiful!

Thank you...

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-22-08 07:29 PM
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:hi:

RL
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