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Tommy_Carcetti Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:23 PM
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My totally original, non-plagarized short essay on this country that I wrote myself.
Don't forget. It took me a long, long time to write this.

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Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battle-field of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field, as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.

But, in a larger sense, we can not dedicate -- we can not consecrate -- we can not hallow -- this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us -- that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion -- that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain -- that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom -- and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.

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SOteric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:25 PM
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1. Bravo.
It reminds me vaguely of something I read on the back of an envelope once.
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Dr. Strange Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:26 PM
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2. Awesome. Just for that, you get $5.
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Tommy_Carcetti Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:36 PM
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3. For your kind donation, I will send you a lapel button.
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LostinVA Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 01:08 PM
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10. He's on the big board now!
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:40 PM
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4. pssst.... it's eleven score and twelve years ago...
otherwise, it's fucking brilliant!!

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Tommy_Carcetti Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:48 PM
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5. Of course it's brilliant.
I'm a MFing prodigy, damn it!
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Zuiderelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 12:59 PM
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6. I certainly hope you have a website where you can post that!
:patriot:

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jobycom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 01:01 PM
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7. 'S'okay, but not very memorable, now is it?
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Parche Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 01:07 PM
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8. Mine Is Better
Four skin and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battle-field of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field, as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.

But, in a larger sense, we can not dedicate -- we can not consecrate -- we can not hallow -- this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us -- that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion -- that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain -- that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom -- and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.



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LostinVA Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-12-08 01:07 PM
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9. OMFG -- BRAVO
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