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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 05:32 PM
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OktoberKid's latest poem
Flowers

Flowers, they remind
me of fireworks. Flowers smell
good. They really are beautiful,
to look at them. They are the things
of my dreams. I have a bed
made of flowers.

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I have a bed made of flowers.

That kid just might be pretty good at this someday.
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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 05:35 PM
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1. We have a flower bed in our front yard.
But I wouldn't sleep there.
Sorry, couldn't resist.
;-)
Yes, he shows great promise.
I know you're proud.
:-)
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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 05:38 PM
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2. Oh gods. Flowerbeds.
I have been dying to put in flower beds for years. I even squared-off and dug up the areas, once, and then we never got around to actually planting the darned things.

I really need to do that this spring. I'm not looking to plant bulbs, so spring planting should be okay.

And thank you. I'm proud of him every day.

:hug:
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leftyclimber Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 06:49 PM
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3. He's definitely inherited your talent.
...a bed made of flowers. Very nice.

Send him hugs from me and Betaben, if you would.

:grouphug:
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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 06:53 PM
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4. You got it.
Edited on Tue Jan-06-09 06:55 PM by oktoberain
He's happy because we're having cheeseburgers for dinner tonight. I haven't the heart to tell him about the salad greens, lol.

Edit: Check your PMs, dear.

:hug:
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bigwillq Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 07:39 PM
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5. Nice.
Tell the kid to keep writing. Writers are awesome. :bounce: :hi:
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tigereye Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-06-09 09:14 PM
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6. that's wonderful!
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