CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-07-09 01:52 AM
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You lean over me In the sacred dark Your hands move over me My head tilts And I feel your kiss, Your touch
Your tenderness Lifts my spirit It says I matter In this upside down World
You hold my face Still with your mouth And I gasp for breath As you touch
You Reach me I join you In your passion My body rises to Meet you
We join at the core In the sacred dark
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:02 AM
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1. My dear California Peggy! |
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Those words are beautiful!
I'm bookmarking for future re-reading, and possible use in wooing....
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:07 AM
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Oh my goodness...
Thank you so much!
Feel free to do any honest wooing with these...
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:03 AM
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... is it warm in here, or is it just me?
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:08 AM
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You have me there...
Glad you enjoyed my little work, sweetie...
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:04 AM
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that is amazing and beautiful and kinda makes me feel like I need a cold shower. You are very talented Peggy!
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:09 AM
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Wow, thank you!
I am amazed that my little poem can make you feel all those splendid ways...
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:04 AM
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:11 AM
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Make sure you have someone you love there too...
Thank you, sweetie...
It means a lot!
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:04 AM
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:10 AM
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I am so happy you enjoyed this!
Thank you...
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:07 AM
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way to go Pegs! :yourock:
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:13 AM
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11. My dear PaddyBlueEyes! |
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I doubt that you and mcctatas need any inspiration, but if you do, feel free to recite this to each other...
Thank you, sweetie...
I am honored by your praise...
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Wed Jan-07-09 06:52 AM
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12. Very well done Peggy!! |
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And when I say wow, I mean wow. ;)
:hi: :loveya: :applause:
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Wed Jan-07-09 10:59 AM
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16. My dear SalmonChantedEvening! |
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Oh, thank you, sweetie...
So glad you like my little work!
:hug: :loveya:
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Wed Jan-07-09 07:07 AM
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I really like this one Peggy!
Your tenderness Lifts my spirit It says I matter In this upside down World
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Wed Jan-07-09 11:01 AM
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Wow, thanks...
This particular stanza gave me some trouble...
I wasn't at all sure I liked it...
I'm glad you do!
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Wed Jan-07-09 09:08 AM
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Wed Jan-07-09 11:02 AM
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Glad you think so!
Thank you...
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Wed Jan-07-09 09:20 AM
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15. Oh Peggy...that is so beautiful! Wow...I am in awe. |
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Wed Jan-07-09 11:04 AM
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Thank you so much...it means a lot.
I am very lucky to have such love in my life...
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Wed Jan-07-09 11:14 AM
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My favorite lines:
You hold my face Still with your mouth And I gasp for breath
:-)
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Wed Jan-07-09 11:19 AM
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Thanks, sweetie!
I like those as well...
Let's just say they're very descriptive...;-)
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Wed Jan-07-09 02:53 PM
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i can only imagine that Mr. CaliforniaPeggy is the inspiration for this one. :P
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Wed Jan-07-09 03:35 PM
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Indeed he is...
How'd you guess?
I am so very lucky!
Thank you...
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