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Fri Mar-06-09 07:24 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 3/6/2009) |
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How Many Times No matter how many times I try I can’t stop my father from walking to my sister’s room and I can’t see any better, leaning from here to look in his eyes. It’s dark in the hall and everyone’s sleeping. This is the past where everything is perfect already and nothing changes, where the water glass falls to the bathroom floor and bounces once before breaking. Nothing. Not the small sound my sister makes, turning over, not the thump of the dog’s tail when he opens one eye to see him stumbling back to bed still drunk, a little bewildered. This is exactly as I knew it would be. And if I whisper her name, hissing a warning, I’ve been doing that for years now, and still the dog startles and growls until he sees it’s our father, and still the door opens, and she makes that small oh turning over. Marie Howe *******************
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Fri Mar-06-09 07:26 AM
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Fri Mar-06-09 08:49 AM
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Edited on Fri Mar-06-09 08:50 AM by Chorophyll
Yipes. (Unironically.)
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Fri Mar-06-09 05:55 PM
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Fri Mar-06-09 10:21 AM
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Fri Mar-06-09 10:29 AM
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5. Blue Iris already posted this one |
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visceral imagery. Punched me in the gut. very effective, this one.
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Fri Mar-06-09 10:33 AM
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6. I love this one. We read the whole book in my 213 class. |
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This poem had me in tears.
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Fri Mar-06-09 05:56 PM
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11. Amazingly powerful and horrific |
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in such an unsettling quiet way...
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Fri Mar-06-09 11:59 AM
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Exquisite, and so sad...
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