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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 07:24 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 3/6/2009)
How Many Times

No matter how many times I try I can’t stop my father
from walking to my sister’s room

and I can’t see any better, leaning from here to look
in his eyes. It’s dark in the hall

and everyone’s sleeping. This is the past
where everything is perfect already and nothing changes,

where the water glass falls to the bathroom floor
and bounces once before breaking.

Nothing. Not the small sound my sister makes, turning
over, not the thump of the dog’s tail

when he opens one eye to see him stumbling back to bed
still drunk, a little bewildered.

This is exactly as I knew it would be.
And if I whisper her name, hissing a warning,

I’ve been doing that for years now, and still the dog
startles and growls until he sees

it’s our father, and still the door opens, and she
makes that small oh turning over.

Marie Howe

*******************

:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 07:26 AM
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 07:30 AM
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2. Good Morning!
:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 08:49 AM
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Edited on Fri Mar-06-09 08:50 AM by Chorophyll
Yipes. (Unironically.)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 05:55 PM
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8. yeah...
:cry:

RL
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Justpat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 10:21 AM
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4. .


:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:




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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 05:55 PM
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9. pretty intense...
:cry:

:hi:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 10:29 AM
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5. Blue Iris already posted this one
visceral imagery. Punched me in the gut. very effective, this one.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 05:55 PM
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10. ...
:hi:

RL
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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 10:33 AM
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6. I love this one. We read the whole book in my 213 class.
This poem had me in tears.

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 05:56 PM
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11. Amazingly powerful and horrific
in such an unsettling quiet way...

:hug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 11:59 AM
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7. My dear Retro...
Exquisite, and so sad...

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Mar-06-09 05:56 PM
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12. ...
:hug:

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