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Tue Oct-20-09 07:14 PM
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Fall dresses in reds,
a blushing apology
for Winter to come.
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| CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Oct-20-09 07:43 PM
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Edited on Tue Oct-20-09 07:43 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
Oh, that's lovely!
I cannot write haiku to save my life.
You should post more of this sort of thing!
Thank you, sweetie...
:hug:
ETA: And put them in your Journal!
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Tue Oct-20-09 08:09 PM
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| 9. Thank you, Miss Peggy! |
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Thank you, Miss Peggy!
Your opinion counts with me.
I'm glad you liked it.
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| Rabrrrrrr
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Tue Oct-20-09 07:46 PM
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Xipe Totec's pants
The gelatin, is it warped?
My, my, deer are swell.
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| Xipe Totec
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Tue Oct-20-09 07:49 PM
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Make fun if you wish,
but one thing you can't deny,
I made you read it.
:P
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Tue Oct-20-09 07:52 PM
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Yes, you made me read
That truth is plain to see
however, you suck
:P
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Tue Oct-20-09 08:00 PM
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speaking of sucking,
five six five is not haiku,
thank you for playing!
:rofl:
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Wed Oct-21-09 08:23 AM
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I emphasized it
with the silence of absence
only fools don't see
further, in this poem
I add an additional beat
now they av'rage out
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Tue Oct-20-09 07:53 PM
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My son has grown fat.
Kwisatz Haderach, he is?
Looks like Orson Welles.
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Wed Oct-21-09 04:58 PM
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Dribbles of ice cream
Spice-sicle melts down chest, thighs
Sands sticks to fat rolls.
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Tue Oct-20-09 07:59 PM
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I want a tipped cow.
big one on her side snoring.
impossible? yes.
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Tue Oct-20-09 08:06 PM
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Hey diddle diddle,
The cow jumped over the moon,
while the cat fiddled.
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Tue Oct-20-09 08:21 PM
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It's a fairy tale
just like hunting them snipe birds
deedle deedle dee
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Tue Oct-20-09 09:39 PM
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Bovine fixation,
fanciful speculation,
reaches tipping point.
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| omega minimo
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Tue Oct-20-09 09:26 PM
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Thinning of the veils
Xipe Totec effort fails
No fault of its own
Devil in details
Plant the seed and next year see
How DU has grown
:grouphug:
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Tue Oct-20-09 09:31 PM
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No such thing as fail
as long as someone reads this,
Spring hopes eternal.
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Tue Oct-20-09 09:32 PM
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Tue Oct-20-09 11:32 PM
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Edited on Tue Oct-20-09 11:32 PM by FlyingSquirrel
8 months without alcohol
I need a damn drink
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