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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 04:49 PM
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My Valentine's Day Poem
Dessert

After dinner
the TV
glows blue
against the
walls

around the
corner

from your
kiss

the hunger is
ending

with
dessert


© 2010 MLC

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OmahaBlueDog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:12 PM
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1. Works for me!
Happy Valentines Day!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:19 PM
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2. My dear OmahaBlueDog!
Ah, I'm so glad it works for you!

Thanks, sweetie...

Happy Valentines Day!

:D
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raptor_rider Donating Member (517 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:20 PM
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3. Saucy Miss Peggy
Saucy... You are good with words.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:26 PM
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4. My dear raptor_rider...
Why......thank you...;)

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Phentex Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:27 PM
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5. I'm blushing yet...
I still want chocolate! :blush:





Good one, Peggy!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:31 PM
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7. My dear Phentex!
Hey!

Blushing means you're alive!

And chocolate helps you enjoy your life...

Thanks, sweetie!

:hug:
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Nicole Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:29 PM
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6. Perfect for Valentine's Day
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 05:32 PM
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8. My dear Nicole!
My thought exactly!

Thanks, sweetie...

:hi:
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Parche Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 06:21 PM
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9. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy
as always good!!

I sense a little kinkyness in this....?? :woohoo: :hi: :hug: :hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 06:57 PM
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10. My dear Parche!
Glad you enjoyed it!

Kinky? Moi? Nah.......maybe a little erotic...

:hug:
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MiddleFingerMom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 07:16 PM
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11. My dear CaliforniaPeggy! Once again... ... ... excellent.
.
And I'm so glad for you that the title was "Dessert" and not "Desert".
.

.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 07:23 PM
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12. My dear MiddleFingerMom!
Ah, thank you!

And yes, I do know the difference...;)

That's a very striking image!

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MiddleFingerMom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 07:41 PM
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15. I was glad more for the state of being rather than the spelling...
.
... and I thought the image was striking, too -- but had to crop about 25% of it
from the top -- it was even MORE striking when I started with it.
.

.
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nolabear Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 07:28 PM
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13. Both naughty and nice...good for more than one holiday!
Thanks for the Valentine's Day treat.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 07:31 PM
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14. My dear nolabear!
You're welcome!

Yup, erotica can often be useful on more than one particular day!

I'm really glad you enjoyed this...

:hug:
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Shine Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 08:03 PM
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16. Mmmm...yummy
:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 08:40 PM
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17. My dear Shine!
Desserts should always be yummy, right?

Thanks, sweetie!

:loveya: too!

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Terra Alta Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 08:42 PM
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18. you have such great talent
thanks for sharing, and hope you are having a wonderful Valentine's Day!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 08:49 PM
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19. My dear Terra Alta...
I thank you so much...

And I AM having a wonderful Valentine's Day!

:hug:
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Dystopian Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 09:51 PM
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20. Beautiful, Peggy!
You are filled with so much love...
And your poetry always places me in a different space and time...
Thank you for sharing...

peace & love to you~
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 09:53 PM
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21. My dear Dystopian...
Ah, thank you, sweetie!

I'm so glad this takes you to a different time and space...

I hope your guy loves it too...

:hug:
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seaker Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 10:59 PM
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22. Yummy
Thank you...Happy Valentines Day :loveya:
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seaker Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 11:00 PM
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23. Yummy
Thank you...Happy Valentines Day :loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Feb-14-10 11:14 PM
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24. My dear seaker!
It IS yummy!

Thanks, sweetie...

Happy Valentine's Day to you too...:loveya:

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NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 10:45 AM
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25. Sweet!
Ah, dessert!

"around the corner... from you kiss".

Love that line.

Happy Day to you two, Califonia Peggy!

:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 12:31 PM
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26. My dear NYC_SKP!
Dessert: Something sweet to end the meal...

We had a lovely day, thanks!

And, as always, I appreciate your comments!

:loveya:
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bridgit Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 01:00 PM
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27. Like: Like Water for Chocolate, we find so much of life's sensual produce & fluids...
Sooner mixed with the warmth & moisture of our tongues & mouths http://www.theromantic.com/stories/flowerpetals/flowers2.htm
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NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 01:14 PM
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29. Oh My!
Edited on Mon Feb-15-10 01:15 PM by NYC_SKP
I do believe I feel faint!



.

.

:P



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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 01:43 PM
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30. Good morning, my dear bridgit!
Indeed, our mouths are central for enjoying life.....from infancy onward.

Thanks for coming by, and for the great reference!

:hi:
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av8rdave Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 01:02 PM
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28. Nice!
Amazing how just a few words can build an entire stage set in my mind.

Thanks!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-15-10 01:45 PM
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31. My dear av8rdave!
Some poems just unreel in my mind, complete from the first word...

This was one of those.

Writing them is a complete mystery...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks!

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