Steerpike
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Thu Jul-29-10 07:19 AM
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You Left Me For Another Girl a Poem by Steerpike |
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You Left me For Another Girl by *MichaelOrtega
I loved to touch your little pearl The deepness in your song and heart You left me for another girl I was the wrong guy for the part
We met in school in Santa Fe You played guitar and sang You wore your clothes like in a play It seemed you had a plan
I fell in love in spite of logic You seemed to love me too But really it was biologic The one you loved was Sue!
Sue was crazy…that I knew… She belched and loved to twirl Inevitably you fell in love And left me for a girl
I look back, now and then, and think of us And what it might have been I laugh and think, "What was the fuss?" You were fat and had bad skin!
So I tell myself it wasn't meant to be I really didn't want you But that's a lie I tell myself Because I cannot face what's true
It's your differences that made me love You danced to a different drum It's your spirit I was in awe of You made me tremble and succumb
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Thu Jul-29-10 07:21 AM
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1. Even though your heart may be breaking |
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I have to admit that your lovely poem really made me smile. :)
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Steerpike
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Thu Jul-29-10 07:23 AM
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I like to write lightly like lyrics to a song...and my heart broke like 25 years ago...so I can see the humor in it too!
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Thu Jul-29-10 07:28 AM
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The following lines are oh so true when it comes to falling in love. Love doesn't always follow logic.
It's your spirit I was in awe of You made me tremble and succumb
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Steerpike
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Thu Jul-29-10 07:30 AM
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very funny are the lies we tell ourselves...it's the truth that breaks our hearts...
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