OmahaBlueDog
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Tue Aug-31-10 11:58 PM
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My Haiku: An Evening in GD |
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I'm angry and bored So you are being ignored You're Invisible
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petronius
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Wed Sep-01-10 12:09 AM
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Windswept crag, a pine Lone thought by a sea of tripe. Posts! The crag swept bare.
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OmahaBlueDog
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Wed Sep-01-10 12:14 AM
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2. Drat! It's far better than mine. |
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Wed Sep-01-10 12:18 AM
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4. Not at all! Yours has an intense visceral honesty. Mine is just a pretentious rip-off |
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of a half-remembered Japanese poem... :)
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Tuesday Afternoon
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Wed Sep-01-10 12:14 AM
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Hamlet, a bloodbath everyone was slaughtered, killed. same way here, tonight.
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Wed Sep-01-10 12:39 AM
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The metaphor of GD as Shakespearean tragedy.
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Tuesday Afternoon
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Wed Sep-01-10 12:40 AM
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Wed Sep-01-10 02:14 AM
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. . . . . . Rage. Rage! Rage!! RAGE!!! RAGE!!!!!!! Lash out there, THERE, EVERYWHERE!!!!! Just don't look at me. . . .
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Wed Sep-01-10 02:26 AM
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Posting in GD Is like country line dancing To a played out song.
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Wed Sep-01-10 02:30 AM
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9. I did not mean to be a copy cat |
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I was playing with my fantasy football teams and decided to cruise over to DU. Spent a few in LBN. Didn't see anything I hadn't read earlier. So I decided to venture over to GD. So I had the same experience you did.
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Wed Sep-01-10 02:35 AM
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Edited on Wed Sep-01-10 02:36 AM by jobycom
GD is a bolt of anger waiting for a place to aim itself.
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Wed Sep-01-10 02:41 AM
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If I could stay out of GD for a l'il while I could do my work.
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Wed Sep-01-10 06:27 AM
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12. Oh. My. - I love this thread. Nt |
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Wed Sep-01-10 06:41 AM
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13. OK, I'll play.This is a true GD story. Only the dog has been changed to protect the innocent. |
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You bit through the leash
Peed on the rug, chewed the drapes
Now you're in my thread
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Wed Sep-01-10 07:49 AM
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14. I Must have that carpet swatch!! I am sure it will match my drapes |
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Please Fed-Ex it to me ASAP. I am including an extra 10spot for the trouble. Thanks.
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