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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:07 PM Original message |
Good at grammar? Help me punctuate this sentence correctly. |
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Common Sense Party (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:09 PM Response to Original message |
1. I would say: "So why, then, is his heart..." |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:12 PM Response to Reply #1 |
2. That was originally how I wrote it |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:16 PM Response to Original message |
3. My dear Mojambo... |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:21 PM Response to Reply #3 |
4. "When in doubt, leave it out" may apply here... |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:26 PM Response to Reply #4 |
5. Common Sense Party says use the commas... |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:28 PM Response to Reply #5 |
6. Thanks, CP. |
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pacalo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:30 PM Response to Original message |
7. "So why, then, is his heart sore as he looks upon the brilliant creatures once again?" |
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HopeHoops (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:42 PM Response to Original message |
8. You must come to me to Alderon and learn the ways of the force. |
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Deep13 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 04:51 PM Response to Original message |
9. No commas. nt |
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Duer 157099 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 05:03 PM Response to Original message |
10. Is it: "so why then" or "so then why"? |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 05:13 PM Response to Reply #10 |
11. Thank you for opening a second front for my insecurity... |
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Duer 157099 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 05:21 PM Response to Reply #11 |
13. Heh. But seriously, here's why I thought of it: |
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Redstone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 05:20 PM Response to Original message |
12. #2: "So why, then, is his heart..." From a professional writer. |
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Deep13 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 06:17 PM Response to Reply #12 |
16. Which rule is that? |
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Redstone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:27 PM Response to Reply #16 |
21. No rule. Just experience. |
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WinkyDink (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 06:29 PM Response to Reply #12 |
35. That's #1. |
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joeybee12 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 05:33 PM Response to Original message |
14. Here's what I say...all are right and all are wrong... |
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some guy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 06:16 PM Response to Original message |
15. So, why then, is . . . |
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frogmarch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 06:23 PM Response to Original message |
17. So, why then is his heart... |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 06:28 PM Response to Reply #17 |
18. Well... |
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frogmarch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 06:52 PM Response to Reply #18 |
19. I think I know what you mean. |
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Xipe Totec (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 06:55 PM Response to Original message |
20. So why then is his heart sore, as he looks upon the brilliant creatures once again? |
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Richardo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 09:43 PM Response to Reply #20 |
29. That would be my pick |
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Curmudgeoness (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:29 PM Response to Original message |
22. Uh, I can't figure out why you want to write that sentence. nt |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:40 PM Response to Reply #22 |
24. It's a paper analyzing 3 poems, one of which is Yeats' Wild Swans at Coole. n/t |
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Tuesday Afternoon (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 11:42 AM Response to Reply #24 |
31. for a formal paper, I think I would leave out 'so' 'then' and also 'once' |
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dimbear (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 09:27 PM Response to Reply #22 |
28. Um, agreed. Sentences which require punctuation gymnastics |
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MorningGlow (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:32 PM Response to Original message |
23. I'll have a go |
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Mojambo (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:42 PM Response to Reply #23 |
25. Aha. Good call on the second comma. |
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LiberalAndProud (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:42 PM Response to Original message |
26. Nonessential qualifier grammar rule. |
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applegrove (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 07:43 PM Response to Original message |
27. Sorry. I have a disability re: grammar and I learnt to read and write in french first. |
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A-Schwarzenegger (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Oct-07-10 09:45 PM Response to Original message |
30. Take out "so". |
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MiddleFingerMom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 11:53 AM Response to Original message |
32. The line is nicely poetic in itself... |
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TrogL (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 12:01 PM Response to Original message |
33. No commas and taking out "then" wouldn't hurt |
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WinkyDink (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 06:28 PM Response to Original message |
34. Choice #1. |
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MrScorpio (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 06:58 PM Response to Original message |
36. "So... Why, then, is his heart sore, as he looks upon the brilliant creatures once again? |
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Pithlet (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-08-10 08:20 PM Response to Original message |
37. So why, then, is his heart sore, as he looks upon the brilliant creatures once again? |
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