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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-25-11 05:55 PM
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Stuff you find in a drawer
Black triangle in light


While the others sleep, the black cat

Sits on the sill in a rectangle of light,

The only one in the dark kitchen, still

As an unwatched sculpture. This morning,

A quiet waiting wedge, the cat eyes

Some gulls ferrying between sky, sand.



Perhaps knowing how near the sand

Dunes are, across the highway only, the cat

Presses the glass, paws her reflection, eyes

Never leaving the gulls just beyond the light

Warming her screened perch. Slowly, it’s morning

In that window. She sits, watching, still.



And she might stay all day, watching still.

The smell of the sea, the ping of blown sand

Tease her to the glass, testing her each morning.

Ancient patience meets disregard in the cat

Who measures the gulls’ flight in the cold light,

Noting the ravens’ clatter too, with great green eyes.



So much unsaid by those wide eyes.

Yet something about her suggests, “Be still,

Or, come closer, I will jump into the light

You play in. You’re playing, I know. The sand

Smells like a beach a grain at a time.” The cat

Stretches gently, jumps, finished for this morning.



I’d thought to paint her, there, some morning.

How to give the motion of her stillness to other eyes?

Or, show color condensing around this small monochrome cat?

An early sketch shows promise but still

It’s only promise, not salt, flight or sand.

Here: A small black triangle on a pale plane of light.



She draws us there, summoning beach light

Slowly into the room. Brightest at mid morning,

But not bright now. The bunch grasses wave, trapping sand

Blown across the highway, and the surfers’ eyes

Narrow against the wind, the ones still

Too young for shades, as they pass by window and cat.



As if you could outwalk the light world of her eyes,

Or the day’s flight from morning, sweeping over the sand.

Or, forgive the still capture of this small black cat.
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Demoiselle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-25-11 06:20 PM
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1. Beautiful...
That lovely piece of poetry should NOT languish in a drawer!
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snagglepuss Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-25-11 09:03 PM
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2. Definitely should not be in a drawer. Lovely.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-25-11 09:17 PM
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3. nice drawer
damn nice
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-25-11 09:37 PM
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4. That's really beautiful...
I had no idea you wrote poetry...

Anytime you want to post more, please do.

Thank you.

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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-26-11 12:59 PM
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5. Hi, Peggy.
Poetry has always been my default. During the Bush years, I switched to comedy and then to essays. Sort of at loose ends at the moment. I've been researching for a long form prose project but maybe there's something else in between. You know how writing is, like a see-saw between Christmas morning and a pop quiz in Econ. lol
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