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Wed Nov-08-06 03:20 PM
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O may I touch your screen, my love? O may I touch your screen? Let's change the world today, my love, Forget all villains mean.
Fain would I poke your chad, dear heart! Fain would I poke your chad! Let's change the world today, dear heart, Remove all miscreants bad.
Alas, I have no chad nor screen! I have no chad nor screen! I've only a pencil us between But you may fill my oval.
Come into the booth with me, my love! Perform your great endeavor: The lever pulled, the oval filled; And the world is changed forever.
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:34 PM
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:35 PM
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I love a charming poetic man. :loveya:
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:35 PM
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3. Ouch. Suck Hard Pukes. Really Hard. n/t |
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:39 PM
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:loveya:
My brother is home!! He finished his service and they let him out!!! :woohoo:
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:45 PM
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:35 PM
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4. For five voices? We have enough new senators for it. |
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Wed Nov-08-06 03:40 PM
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Wed Nov-08-06 05:21 PM
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Edited on Wed Nov-08-06 05:21 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
This is really beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes.......
Especially this last verse:
Come into the booth with me, my love! Perform your great endeavor: The lever pulled, the oval filled; And the world is changed forever.
Really amazing! You, my dear swimboy, have a gift!
I'd love to have your writing appear more often ...
:hug:
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Thu Nov-09-06 12:22 AM
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and recommended. :thumbsup:
:kick:
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Thu Nov-09-06 02:06 AM
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12. Thrilled to give this Recommendation #5 |
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Thu Nov-09-06 04:46 PM
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14. What a wonderful talent you have! |
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:applause:
I'm envious!
Thank you so much for taking the time to write this, and for posting it here.
Such a wonderful break from so many flame wars!!
More, pleeeeez!
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Thu Nov-09-06 04:47 PM
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Fri Nov-10-06 03:56 PM
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16. Wonderful work! Bravo! |
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Pure genius, that.
:applause:
And yes darling, you may take your pencil to my oval ANYtime!
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