Ghost in the Machine
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Tue May-22-07 04:43 PM
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Please tell me what you think of this. A song for the soldiers. |
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Written 5-22-007 by Douglas Davis
Sung to the tune of "Lodi" by Creedence Clearwater Revival
Well just about 4 years ago, I was sent off to Iraq, seeking weapons of mass destruction, looking for the motherlode. Things got bad and things got worse, I'm on my 3rd tour now Oh Lord, I'm stuck in Iraq again...
I rode in on a HumVee, I'll be lucky to make it back, Seeing all death and destruction, hope it don't make me crack. Run from the bombs and bullets, looks like they killed my friend' Oh Lord, I'm stuck in Iraq again...
The man from the DoD, called up a soldiers mom. He said "I hate to tell you, your son was just killed by a bomb". We came over here to spread democracy, looks like the plan fell through. Oh Lord, I'm stuck in Iraq again...
Now if I only had an answer, to every question "why?" Why did these soldiers have to die, why did George Bush lie? I hope I'm on the next plane back to where I live Oh Lord, I'm stuck in Iraq again Oh Lord.. stuck in a quagmire again.
Any comments, changes, improvements or criticisms welcome....
PEACE!
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Tue May-22-07 04:47 PM
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Tue May-22-07 04:52 PM
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Wonder if we can get John Fogerty to sing it? We need a CCR revival!
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Tue May-22-07 05:51 PM
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Wed May-23-07 12:38 AM
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Tue May-22-07 05:55 PM
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4. Good lyrics but I can't remember the tune, dammit! |
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So where are my CCR albums? In the attic. Rats. ;-)
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Tue May-22-07 06:06 PM
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5. Lodi is one of my favorite CCR songs |
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along with bad moon rising and fortunate son
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Tue May-22-07 06:23 PM
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6. I think Out my Back Door is my favorite |
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But I never heard one I didn't like! :D
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Tue May-22-07 07:00 PM
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a link to youtube. I don't know who these people are, but maybe this will help you remember the tune: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nuC4yJpSV2s&mode=related&search=
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Tue May-22-07 06:46 PM
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I wouldn't change a thing.
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Tue May-22-07 07:46 PM
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Tue May-22-07 06:51 PM
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8. Magnificent Ghost In The Machine!! |
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Edited on Tue May-22-07 06:51 PM by SalmonChantedEvening
Spot on and all I can say is Do NOT change a word of it.
:applause: :yourock: :pals:
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Tue May-22-07 07:48 PM
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11. Thank you SalmonChantedEvening! |
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It just popped into my head, and this was the only way to get it out.
Feel free to share it if you'd like...
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