GinaMaria
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Mon Oct-27-03 10:45 AM
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| 55. it's hard to believe this is the script |
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The dialogue is really stilted. Just a guess but it seems like a hoax. Just something to rile the base.
How about this
Ronnie: So, I'm the AntiChrist!
Nancy: Ronnie, stop
Ronnie: Those commie pinko leftwing...
Nancy: Calm down. Relax. I completely agree with you
Ronnie: Just look at the first ingredient on the bottle
Ronnie hands Nancy a Catsup bottle. She reads the label.
Nancy: I know. The first ingredient is tomatoes.
Ronnie: So of course Catsup is a vegatable.
Ronnie walks off muttering to himself.
Ronnie: They just don't understand me. No one understands me. Try to help, but no one gets it....
Well it's a first draft. It needs some help. Any suggestions?
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